Though this story may never fully reach its intended ending the way it’s supposed to, these snippets are gold. Thank you. Please keep adding and writing for this?

I hope she talk to Shuukaku.

I think how this people would react if Sesshoumaru came there.
They would try to use him like a bijuu? What they were going to do.
I'm curios to know what happened to kagome she is much more passive than she was. She lost the battle? Or lost every one in the battle?

I read this entire story in 2 sittings. I enjoyed it that much, but I have to say it isn't a story anymore. After chapter 17, all the buildup was gone. In a single chapter, you rushed through years of important events and character relationships. I understand if you want to finish, but it was just such a reversal from the first 17 chapters. Everything since is disjointed and a lot of the tension is gone. There's no question about where people and events go from here. The snippets just sapped out everything interesting and unique about the story.

Great story. I look forward to when it is out of hiatus. Keep up the great work and update soon!

Oh my. Amazing story. Fantastic.

Kagome’s growing powers. Are sure terrifying as fuck and active. I wonder if it still like this if she was back in her own ... worlds?

But in this world, the Ninja world, she is a terrifying, yet beyond wonderful anonymity. She can do great and terrible things if she wanted to.

She’s stick in Sand for two years now. So what? She didn’t really meet with Akatsuki?

And did she visit other villages since they know about her? The powerful Konoha pervert went back to his village and spill everything I’m sure. Or you know, go on vacation away from sand for a week or something?

Please update soon. It’s been months.

This is a wonderful and very well written story that captures readers’ attentions at the beginning of the first paragraph.

Thank you!

Excuse me..
So.. Not to be rude but the snippets should have not been added in this story.

It should have been put in its own designated title... Or something. Then just create an AN that you have create a snippet for this story.. Damn, sorry, I'm not good in speaking English . still I hope my thought pass.

My heart ache at the moment. Ghaddd I really like the story. I was quite happy with knowing there were 24 chapters but to learn that the rest of the chapters actually did not ' 'continue ' the plot, I'm sad.

. I like the story, super. From the plot, the character building, the different POVs, and also the evil and light atmosphere as I read the story...

Except the snippet insert part.

Anyway, I hope you are in good health author san. Thanks for writing and sharing this story to us readers.

This chapter reminds me of that master-slave relationship. :I-teach-you-learn'. Just a bit. Lmao.
But that AN sure is entertaining

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This story is very well written. I was pleasantly shocked about how it developed and most certainly hope for the continuation of it.

Agh, this chapter made me cry.

... now I want to read more about Mouse as much as the actual story.
Awesome work!

...update, really, really good story, it’s torture for an update

Yay! I am finally up to date and all I have to say is that...I LOVED it. The characterization is wonderful. The writing is wonderful. You are wonderful. I can't wait to see what is in store next time.

Wow...that is really enlightening. I enjoyed your points and was thinking throughout the whole chapter about everything you said. I have a feeling that my English teachers would love you.

Well now that was depressing. I feel bad for Gaara but I am not surprised. Rasa is the one who will push Kagome to become stronger so the pairing makes sense. I hope Gaara will find someone else to love and be happy with.