Reviews for Wind Carved Change
ninjafox911 chapter 3 . 9/1/2014
hay! u should continue this, not living in the middle r u?
Moka-girl chapter 1 . 6/26/2014
Well... what most time travel fics forget is that this is a ninja village, a military village. If a class idiot suddenly started beating everyone in spars and got the best marks, people wouldn't be impressed, they'd think he was an impostor that had taken Naruto's appearance in order to infiltrate the village. Also, his change in appearance is enough for people to be suspiscious.

So, yeah. That could've been done better. Maybe if he improved gradually, instead of going from the worst to the best, with no in-between.
Asurau chapter 3 . 6/23/2014
Color me interested. I look foward to seeing how the Uchiha incidents shakes out this time.
duchessliz chapter 3 . 6/9/2014
what the hell is a Saimingan? o.O I think you meant to put Sharingan but you misspelled it as Saimingan three times ... distracted me every time ... how did it end up a Saimingan? -_-'
DefinitelyNotATurnip chapter 3 . 4/29/2014
Please, please, *please* keep updating this! I'm not usually a fan of time-travel fics, mostly because they're so hard to get right. But this has been terrific so far! The way you write, it's just majestic. Keep it up!
sortofbored chapter 3 . 4/26/2014
This is fantastic. Looking forward to more.
HermioneeBlack chapter 3 . 4/25/2014
guess 99% of the time travel stories fail their purpose at uchiha massacre. if you are going to follow canon, get it over in single sentence. don't write a chapter.
RenegadeS chapter 3 . 4/17/2014
I like this story, its not mindless cannon rehasing like so many other time travel stories and I don't notice any big grammar or spelling mistakes like in most stories, keep up the good work
THE 7TH DEMON OF RAZGRIZ chapter 3 . 4/13/2014
Great job on this chapter well done you pulled this off very well you could quite possibly pull of the uchiha being saved from the massacre or kill them and save sasuke from hatred you could choose ether and it would work which all have tried and few pulled it off congrats and you had better update soon you can't leave it like this
ViolatedMonkey chapter 3 . 4/13/2014
Wow i feel bad for the uchiha clan. All caught up in the evil that is konoha. Konoha is really evil for what they have done to the uchiha clan its amazing how you still have naruto on their side. Either he's too blinded or purposely closing his eyes to the issue. He needs to convince the uchiha to run away from konoha because konoha is basically over. Once tobirama took over the village the village lost all purpose and became petty and hateful. I can not fathom why naruto would want to protect konoha.
tonyblu chapter 2 . 4/6/2014
Dodging just to see your girlfriend in the mornings is something imperatory, you know?
That... in high school, or above.
Great story, I love it so far, well-written, clean and kept me up half a hour at night just to read.
Keep it up.
Guest chapter 2 . 4/4/2014
Awwww thank you for making Sakura wake up and snap put of her fan girl state :) I'm a big Sakura fan and this is probably one of the few times I dont see Sakura getting bashed in a time travel story that doesn't have her as a main character
Kyuu chapter 2 . 4/2/2014
Really good, looking forward to reading more.
ChoppedHige chapter 2 . 4/3/2014
Even though it's a Sakura pairing, this has the beginnings of what actually might be a good time-travel story. Thanks and keep up the good work.
sortofbored chapter 2 . 4/3/2014
This is really awesome. It is very well written and is one of the better time travel stories I've seen. Plus I love the pairing.
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