Reviews for Promises
kawaiiakita chapter 14 . 11/22/2016
You really have a good story here!...
Keep it up
Musa Silver-Hawk chapter 14 . 8/29/2016
I loved this story. I couldn't stop reading it!
End-Rose chapter 9 . 8/7/2016
It's Sesshy's though right?
leenadavinci chapter 14 . 7/12/2016
awe this is just too cute I love it so much! I love the pup
munford chapter 14 . 1/14/2016
This is an adorable story, I love it. Keep up the good work.
Undertheskys chapter 6 . 10/4/2015
The relationship between Kagome and Sesshomaru is cute, I love how he's says he said he would protect her when she asked him to rough her up a bit
Undertheskys chapter 1 . 10/3/2015
Why are do some sentences have too much spacing between words
Undertheskys chapter 1 . 10/3/2015
Why are do some sentences have too much spacing between words
Mirage chapter 11 . 8/25/2015
i think im a bit lost...first they did travel, but after she did Show that shw was pregnant they stoped to Keep her save...then Naraku takes the jewels parts-only two not- they had, and they go after him even when she was in her 7 month...why not wayt the last month become the child-puppy ...whatever...and then go after him to take the jewel parts back...why risk her and the Baby in such a sensitive state...
that was really stupid...i mean it was only 2 month waiting Maximum...awww i could hit my head to the walll about this thoughtlesness...
jbkb chapter 1 . 7/15/2015
I am confused about the amount of time she was training. At one point you used the phrase "The next few weeks" implying she spent many weeks there, then twice you say "two weeks" I doubt she could master the basic kata in only 2 weeks let only more advanced kata and work in weapons training to boot.
Pixiecropse chapter 14 . 5/4/2015
awe dlfgsldfjgkjs'fjgs;ldfjgkjsfglsfdj'gjd'hjg';kfsjgldfjg;ksd adorable
Miketsukami-kun chapter 14 . 3/18/2015
This was soooo good, I'm actually really happy that I got to it this late in the game because that means I just got to read it all at once! I love this story and you too!
SaiyaCat chapter 14 . 2/20/2015
So Cute
kimchi759 chapter 4 . 9/28/2014
Kagome is a bit annoying in this story. She's all "eww" and "Fluffy!". Also, I didn't really like Kagome calling him Fluffy in front of Kouga. First of all, it's disrespectful as he's supposed to have a high position. Secobdly, say it's okay for her to call him that because she's special, it's still shouldn't be okay for her to call him that in front of Kouga. They can have pet names, they just shouldn't be shared with strangers, which Kouga technically is in terms of this relationship. Secondly, you characterized Sesshomaru as a lot weaker. It's one thing for him to be fluffier and more softhearted as you've made him out to be, and another for him and Kagome to fall for each other so easily, but it's yet another for him to be taken off guard after less than a year of practice in glaive training when he's a superpowered old/experienced Daiyoukai. I don't know. It just kinda feels like you're caricaturizing them... arghh. Ah well. On to the next chappy.
kimchi759 chapter 1 . 9/28/2014
Things are moving very, very fast between the two...And you've characterized Lord Fluffy a lot more fluffy than he is in canon, but I'll just accept it as part of your writing style. Besides, I'm enjoying the lighter tone after reading with angst on angst on angst. :)
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