|Reviews for Harry Potter And The Lord of Potter|
| davycrockett100 chapter 5 . 7/26/2014
| Alaiana Potter chapter 4 . 7/18/2014
If he could not be a lord and he is just harry why dis he accept the lordship ring?
| Linda chapter 5 . 7/3/2014
| NANA-Chan101 chapter 5 . 7/5/2014
I like it and keep up the good work :)
and i wonder what the parring is... i know you said slash but is it with who... well the suspense is killing me ;)
| loopyhutton chapter 5 . 7/4/2014
Just found, I read all the chapters & I loved it! Hope you continue this in the future!
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/1/2014
| WolfGirl75 chapter 5 . 7/2/2014
wow! cant wait for more. update soon!
| Melikalilly chapter 5 . 7/2/2014
I love this story
| geetac chapter 5 . 7/1/2014
I like the chapter
| Arabella Prince chapter 4 . 6/7/2014
Love that Harry is basically the heir of Hogwarts. Just a few simple grammatical errors, but overall mostly good. Really hope you're still open to me beta reading this, it would be awesome. Until then.
| Arabella Prince chapter 3 . 6/7/2014
Firstly, same thing I said about the letter applies here. I'd put horizontal lines to separate the italicized words on the plaque. Also, I just saw a few sentences that could perhaps be rearranged for better clarity. Overall a great chapter though... Your plot is amazing so far.
| Arabella Prince chapter 2 . 6/7/2014
Loving this chapter as we'll, quite a fascinating story line. Plus, I do love myself a slightly less crass Snape. Just from this first look and my tired mind, I think that you may be overusing your capital letters. Species names are not capitalized as their scientific name is the genus. And the genus is not capitalized, even though the other levels of scientific categorization are. Other than that, I just caught a few spelling and grammar errors that are an easy fix.
| Arabella Prince chapter 1 . 6/7/2014
Love this chapter. The only issue I see is a lot of long paragraphs that tend to make it feel a bit bumbling, as if you were rambling. Other than that, I would recommend placing horizontal lines when you are starting a letter, as well as using italics. If you still want me to be your beta, then we could look over these chapters already established and replace them with only slight changes to the format and grammar.
| Linda chapter 4 . 6/4/2014
Good so far wish chapters were longer, hope to read more soon.
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/3/2014