|Reviews for Capybari|
| Lucrecia LeVrai chapter 1 . 7/7/2014
Writing a good sex scene (or a foreplay scene, in this case) is really difficult, and most fanfic writers can't do it at all, ending up in a land of cheesiness and horrible purple prose. You, on the other hand, managed to write it like a pro. Hiyori and Yato's interaction was romantic, natural, light-hearted and very much in character, stripped of unnecessary pathos or too much detail. The "plot" behind the sudden intimacy was rather pretext, yes, but I don't think it matters much if the main focus of the story worked out so well.
| SycoSiren chapter 1 . 5/4/2014
Omg. I giggled Soooo hard at the end. Butttttt again I loved it, alot! More Pleaseeeeee? Lol and the detail you go into is very very very um pleasing? As perverted as they may sound I enjoyed it, it's different and I never thought of her cord in such a way.
| Tsuki KamiNeko chapter 1 . 4/11/2014
I think I just spat out my own drink.
Ah. So good Made my cheeks all red and my heart flutter! It was a great story! :) 3
| Nonya chapter 1 . 4/9/2014
I I ... LOVED IT IT WAS AMAZING
| Sleepyface chapter 1 . 4/4/2014
More tail touching please! XD
| emeraldd30 chapter 1 . 4/3/2014
I read the mature version of this and loved it! That was a sexy good time!
| Zangetsu Ossan chapter 1 . 4/2/2014
this is freaking hilarious! good job!