Reviews for Pulse
LittleEnglishLass chapter 1 . 1/7
Me again. *hi* ;)

This was an very interesting piece. Again, I loved the way you've balanced the dialogue and description. The plotline was very good, you managed to span it across the whole story yet rounded it off well at a good place. That is often the single most difficult thing in writing.

I can't really comment on the capture of the characters since I am unfamiliar with them, but I CAN say that they seem very realistically written and 'fleshed out', for want of a better phrase. :D They're 3D, jumping off the page and running around with a wild abandon! Congratulations is once again in order. Good job!
firerosedreamer67 chapter 1 . 8/2/2014
Sometimes enough is too much...and waking up tells a bad story of where you were...
HasFar2Go chapter 1 . 4/10/2014
This was sweet and funny and the ending was so perfect. A great piece from start to finish.
Lissyh chapter 1 . 4/7/2014
eu amei. eles juntos. pelo menos ela esta admitindo seus sentimentos
Redlisted chapter 1 . 4/7/2014
:-)
SimplyChainrings chapter 1 . 4/7/2014
I enjoyed this! Thanks for sharing!
Skeeter69 chapter 1 . 4/6/2014
A different side of Red. Interesting storyline and title. Really liked the way you wrote the disapproving Dembe proving that he is more than just Red's employee. Also a little surprised that Liz seemed so easy going about the whole esperience. Well written!
Jessahme Wren chapter 1 . 4/5/2014
I love this! I love the title and the meaning behind it. Red getting high is just somehow endearing. I love his little fantasy of her in that peasant top. There's a sweetness and a venerability to this that is so appealing! Thank you for this! It's inventive and different and so well written! I love! :)
DukeGirl2001 chapter 1 . 4/2/2014
Aww...loved it!
xyber116 chapter 1 . 4/2/2014
This is great! I really enjoyed it.
jjgoodhope chapter 1 . 4/2/2014
Absolutely fabulous from start to finish! The interaction between Red and Dembe was great. Dembe was so disapproving and I love your description especially of the moon and the stars - felt like I was there, lol. And of course a repentant Red is irresistible. Great job! xxxx JJ
Redlover chapter 1 . 4/2/2014
Cute...I believe Red does indulge in some of this kind of stuff occasionally from some of the comments he has made...LOL
MalbecMalcontent chapter 1 . 4/2/2014
Loved it! Well done - I enjoyed "High Red"!
OpenMouthedIntoTheOcean chapter 1 . 4/2/2014
Eeeep I love this! High Red and Lizzie to the rescue is too cute _
simmydim88 chapter 1 . 4/2/2014
Haha. I loved this. Drugged out Red..
20 | Page 1 2 Next »