|Reviews for Clove's tale|
| astonmartin177 chapter 1 . 11/25/2014
This sounds like such an interesting idea, but I can't follow what you're saying because the sentences aren't constructed properly. There are words missing in some sentences and some sentences have words added. I'm not sure if English is your first language but I think if you had someone edit your chapters before you upload them this story would be fantastic. Good luck!
| DegrassiLover67 chapter 14 . 10/23/2014
| Frostbitten Fire Blade chapter 13 . 7/18/2014
I'm gonna fav this at the next character death.
I love fan fiction.
| Frostbitten Fire Blade chapter 12 . 7/14/2014
I like both really:) but which ever one you want I don't mind:D
| Frostbitten Fire Blade chapter 11 . 7/12/2014
Wait I've been forgetting to commet this whole story?!
Anyway love the story!:)
| castielsanus chapter 7 . 5/7/2014
seriously great! i love how your intertwining the book and you story together! great work!
| Guest chapter 5 . 4/20/2014
You're doing a really great job. X
| clovelycato555 chapter 3 . 4/13/2014
please update :)
| Prowriter13 chapter 1 . 4/7/2014
You did very well but it was very hard to follow. It sounded more like a robot, but it's still very good. I enjoyed reading it. I can't wait for the next chapter and if your still looking for a speedy beta I may be of some help if you wish. PM me if your interested.