Reviews for A Second Chance
TheOrangeLord chapter 12 . 5/2
I really hope the book isn't dead, I really like it so far! I hope that you chose to continue it someday!
Juvel Rivera chapter 4 . 4/22
Lol. EMIYA letting an "Enemy" finish his speech, without immediate action?

Archer's reaction seems too slow in this fic.
Axccel chapter 11 . 4/20
Shirou can trace incredibly powerful things, but those he can usually only use once by depleting his energy entirely. What makes him successful is that he always makes it count. He may pass out using one attack, but victorious.
Axccel chapter 10 . 4/20
Shirou’s strength is the insane things he can trace. He, or you, sells him short.
Axccel chapter 5 . 4/20
Akeno is just as much a masochistic sub as she is a sadistic dom. And she claims Rias is even more so for both than she is but better at hiding it.

Don’t see why he’d worry he’s a pedophile. A difference in age has nothing even slightly to do with who a child is. Children aren’t children because their parents are older. If anything, a much older man marrying a girl is natural and was the norm everywhere until only around eighty years ago maybe less. Because the man is settled and has a stable life. This was broken up via social engineering because people stable lives don’t give power to Big Brother to take care of them. The idea of people close to the same age being the only “right” coupling is unnatural nonsense forced upon people by having teachers and media and movies shame anyone who doesn’t do that by portraying them as creeps or abusive and sick.
Axccel chapter 3 . 4/20
It’s hilarious how we know how incredibly outclassed they all are by him.
Axccel chapter 2 . 4/19
Ugh, yet another fic with him or whatever crossover character becoming a devil and thereby defeating the point of a crossover. I’ll read on only because of Akeno being focused on, which is rare.
RedWolf705 chapter 11 . 4/13
Keyword being "in the Nasuverse". Putting Shirou relative to the DxD verse, his sheer versatility alone is enough to let him fight on par with anything short of say, Issei/Vali in their Balance Breaker and anyone stronger than them like the Satans, gods and the Seraphs. Devils? just Trace a holy sword like Caliburn. Fallen Angels? pin them down with Black Keys. Literally anything else? just rain swords on them Gilgamesh style or hell, just Trace Gae Bolg, thrust and call it a day. And that's without him using his Reality Marble, or assuming what he could possibly have in his Marble, like say a dragonslaying sword for dragon enemies like the Evil Dragons. Point is, he's mainly only low rank in the Nasuverse because of all the broken shit in that universe like Servants, Gilgamesh and the Dead Apostle Ancestors. Assuming he'd also be low rank in a universe where none of those broken beings exist is a fallacy
stylo1 chapter 11 . 4/3
in your AN you said you already boosted archers power because he is actually a very low powered magus.
these ideas of your only come from the fact that you dont seem to think nasu verse and dxd is all that different. hell a mage in dxd has it quite easy while a magus from nasu is a damned hard thing to do.
stylo1 chapter 9 . 4/3
your whining about odd and prana and gaia is really stupid seeing as they dont exist in this world
stylo1 chapter 6 . 4/3
dont all supernatural ppl have some kind of pssive reinforcement? how else can they become so strong
stylo1 chapter 4 . 4/3
far to much explaining why and how the fights were happening instead of letting it happen. seriously it felt like you were constantly making excuses of why they were either powerful or weak
stylo1 chapter 3 . 4/3
sword birth does exactly what shirou does, create swords from magic. so him claiming it isnt a sacred gear but just does the same should raise major questions.
not that being capable of magic as a human in a way that isnt heard of before is normal

i doubt you even thought about these things though
stylo1 chapter 3 . 4/3
shame he still has his mage circuits as that is a major step down from what the rest of the world has.

his cooking is good because of reinforcement not because of analyses

i doubt you've considered this but without gaia counteracting his magecraft anything he does will become permanent and that much more powerfull
stylo1 chapter 2 . 4/3
he is a part of a shinto priest clan and thus knowing about the supernatural yet later on claiming his knowledge of devils comes from the bibel.

basicly you 'forgot' all about his history as a himejima and just went with the common trope of needing to disprove the bibel.

why bother with any details
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