Reviews for A Second Chance |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is garbage... Seriously, WTF? |
![]() ![]() ![]() unoriginal |
![]() ![]() ![]() considering what shirou's soul contains im suprised it only took 1 pawn piece to reincarnate him |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would love to see an adult illya, well i guess i could imagine her as irisviel |
![]() ![]() ![]() Akeno is one of the hottest girls in dxd and a maiden, and she hates the Fallen Angel lineage. Fallen Angels have the most seductive bodies, and can entice any male into sin by sex they ste equivalent to a succubus. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You obviously haven’t read dxd to assume anything about Issei he is a great character. Issei got his perversion from his grandparents, and it doesn’t take away hid many positive traits. He is very loyal to his friends and the boy even turns enemies to his side. He cares for his women a great deal and has a rule not to have a relationship unless the girl loves him. He hates rapists and makes a point to destroy them, and cares for the well being and happiness of the girls. |
![]() ![]() ![]() only 1 pawn piece? seems a little low. Sanji in Sonas peerage took 4. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is really excellent to read. I hope you come back to it eventually as I'd love to find out what happens next |
![]() ![]() This has to be the biggest load of bullshit I've seen a fic try to justify |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really interesting. I hope you continue this |
![]() ![]() ![]() While I can tolerate any difference between characters of different universes, the only reason why Archer takes a single pawn piece is plot convenience. Pieces turn the soul and Archer's soul is a whole world which should make it nigh impossible to turn him into a devil. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shirou do have high potential as a devil though, because he's got the will power to push himself to extremes in training, and being a devil mean that you will grow stronger as long as you put in the effort, and a not that extraordinarily strong body and relatively few magic circuits are why Shirou is relatively low potential, going from human to devil mean enough training can change both of those, which turn him from relatively low potential to very high potential, because Noble Phantasms are extremely powerful, so when Shirou can afford to project hundreds of A-rank Noble Phantasms and overload them into broken phantasms, and have the stats to actually be able to make use of the full weapon skills, he can read and copy from the weapons of the greatest weapon wielders to ever live, Shirou suddenly go from not that high potential to extremely high potential. |
![]() ![]() ![]() stupid only 1piece pawn fuck no shit... go kill your self... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not going to lie. I stopped reading about 15 seconds into the story. An impressive feat in itself. Thank God they found a way to to create an inanimate lesser grail... hahahaha. Why is that funny? I leave that to you to figure it out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() read chapter 2 and just stopped. worth 1 pawn piece yet the dude has a reality marble and was able to fight on par with some of the most broken characters ever. that would put her brother and serafall at like 1/4 a pawn if that |