| Reviews for When the past comes back |
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  Guest chapter 8 . 4/13/2014 Captured version please :) |
 Burt00 chapter 8 . 4/13/2014 I would really love to read the other chapter where riley is captured! I hope you post it! |
| sincetheworlddidnotend chapter 8 . 4/13/2014 Will buy only the other version, please make that happen! |
| Guest chapter 7 . 4/12/2014 More but pleases finish it I love it |
| nrdhrd3 chapter 7 . 4/9/2014 I can't wait |
| TearsInTheDust chapter 7 . 4/9/2014 Liked it! Want more! |
| nrdhrd3 chapter 6 . 4/7/2014 I WANT MORE! |
| TearsInTheDust chapter 6 . 4/7/2014 Liked it! Keep up the good work! |
| Clockwork Orange chapter 5 . 4/6/2014 I don't get the dialogue formatting in this chapter. You started off using quotation marks, as you should, but then you went with R and M without quotations? Stick with one format, preferably the correct one. |
| nrdhrd3 chapter 5 . 4/6/2014 Just because it was a short chapter doesn't mean it was AWESOME! |
| JenB chapter 5 . 4/6/2014 I'm enjoying your story but am a little confused about Michael. He sounded like a troubled but good guy who wanted to save his sister. But with this latest chapter he sounds totally bad and mean. Can you explain or will it be more clear in the coming chapters? |
| A chapter 4 . 4/6/2014 OMG YES PLEASE :)! |
| TearsInTheDust chapter 4 . 4/6/2014 So sad, but I loved it! |
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/5/2014 BRILLIANT LOVE! |
| red lighting chapter 3 . 4/5/2014 Amazing chapter |