Reviews for When the past comes back
Guest chapter 8 . 4/13/2014
Captured version please :)
Burt00 chapter 8 . 4/13/2014
I would really love to read the other chapter where riley is captured! I hope you post it!
sincetheworlddidnotend chapter 8 . 4/13/2014
Will buy only the other version, please make that happen!
Guest chapter 7 . 4/12/2014
More but pleases finish it I love it
nrdhrd3 chapter 7 . 4/9/2014
I can't wait
TearsInTheDust chapter 7 . 4/9/2014
Liked it! Want more!
nrdhrd3 chapter 6 . 4/7/2014
I WANT MORE!
TearsInTheDust chapter 6 . 4/7/2014
Liked it! Keep up the good work!
Clockwork Orange chapter 5 . 4/6/2014
I don't get the dialogue formatting in this chapter. You started off using quotation marks, as you should, but then you went with R and M without quotations? Stick with one format, preferably the correct one.
nrdhrd3 chapter 5 . 4/6/2014
Just because it was a short chapter doesn't mean it was AWESOME!
JenB chapter 5 . 4/6/2014
I'm enjoying your story but am a little confused about Michael. He sounded like a troubled but good guy who wanted to save his sister. But with this latest chapter he sounds totally bad and mean. Can you explain or will it be more clear in the coming chapters?
A chapter 4 . 4/6/2014
OMG YES PLEASE :)!
TearsInTheDust chapter 4 . 4/6/2014
So sad, but I loved it!
Guest chapter 3 . 4/5/2014
BRILLIANT LOVE!
red lighting chapter 3 . 4/5/2014
Amazing chapter
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