|Reviews for Worlds Apart|
| loki98065 chapter 8 . 5/26/2019
nice work. shame u dropped it.
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/6/2019
I didn't even finish this chapter. When an Ascended being came down and resurrected the Adama girl. What a shitshow.
First the Gundam, then the Red Haired Blue Eyes White Niponese.
Then the wannabe Halo MAC, oof.
I'm guessing somewhere the Glorious Nippon folded Steel Katana will make an appearance, then the Redhaired OC, will don his trenchcoat, and fedora, while praising the elegance of the katana, a weapon for a more civilized age.
To be honest, I'll skim the next chapter, as I find these stories cringey as fuck, but reading (skimming) about Gary Stus and seeing what stupid shit happens, and how they'll save the day from impossible odds, are entertaining to me.
| Andrei chapter 1 . 2/6/2019
A ship capable of hyperspace travel must have sensors capable of detectinh asteroids otherwise it would slam head-on into them, so the first step in your story is already crap.
And it's ventral (as in on its belly) not ventricle, as in small heart chamber.
I have the nasty feeling that i will waste my time with this story so.. bye bye.
| JOHN0713 chapter 8 . 12/17/2018
I think this a good story and look forward to the day you decide to finish it.
| Andrei chapter 1 . 8/4/2018
What's with you japs and robot/gundam suits? Are you trying to compensatefor something?
| M.A.N chapter 1 . 3/24/2018
Sweet mother of mercy. Those cylons are now nothing but a successfully scrapped robots if they don't adapt more technology or improve there computer virus in a few year *cough* no a few months if Tau'ri and Asgard dump there space fleet to them,instead if all make peace...
They will spread there exploration and diplomacy across the local super cluster and even... Multiverses!
| anja.quickert.9 chapter 8 . 3/20/2018
| EvilTheLast chapter 8 . 3/5/2018
Ya, I hear you. I had a writer wanting new ideas for a future story of his. (He had 1/2 dozens stories in his head that he hadn't started). He wanted new ideas. I came up with one that was a SG-1/BSG2003 cross over...that happens in a hundred years in the future instead of the story he just finished. I started to Email my ideas for this 'epic' story and realized this the story would take him 3 years to write if he followed my plot line...even if he updated every 10 days with a medium chapters! I deleted that Email that took me 2 hours 2 write.
| Zomvee chapter 8 . 3/4/2018
What does Ja Ne mean and what language is it?
| Chronus1326 chapter 8 . 3/4/2018
Hey man, as long as you write sci-fi and there's world building and plasma cannons, I'll read it. Good luck!
| Eager Fan chapter 8 . 3/4/2018
Figured, I am really going to miss this story
| kamikage86 chapter 8 . 3/4/2018
I hope this story is adopted and continued, thanks for informing us.
| Guest chapter 7 . 2/15/2018
Almost 2 years since the last update, same this story has been abandoned
| Jolly Roger chapter 1 . 2/5/2018
So... pirates are going to capture a commissioned active duty warship? A major unit that can engage fleets? You don't seem to grasp the magnitude of the difference here. Perhaps they are Crackhead pirates?
| anja.quickert.9 chapter 7 . 5/28/2017
:-) :-) :-)