damn that was good

One of the best ever stories on fanfiction.

What a selfish prick...its only a year...ilk be back...fuck that

That was lovely. Thank you.

Love the ending. Sad that Alice cannot get over herself to be happy for her brother...but love the ending.

Just read this all in one day. Amazing story. Thank you !

I must admit, I haven't been commenting on anything lately. That being said, I needed to comment on your story. It is THAT GOOD. I loved your writing style. It takes talent to tell a story in such a visceral, sensory driven way. Thank you for sharing your talent! Brava!

Loved the ending

A bit of intrigue has settled itself inside of her... wondering, Why he acted like that...

I doubt he had a thing to do with his wife's death, but somehow he feels responsible. That whatever happened to her he felt helpless because he could not stop her from dying. His soul is torched because he was useless to keep her from leaving him...

WHy to torture you of course why else would I be sitting in your class...
To make you think you have gone insane why else would I subject myself to your boarishness

Loved the comparison to Dorian Gray 'in the negative'

Hmm, perhaps a clue... the pitter-patter of her HEALTHY heart
Could this be what cut the life of Maggie short, a bad heart...?

Whoa he needs to get himself under control before he makes a Very Large mistake...

Wow it's like looking at a ghost sitting in the front row... to say he is stunned would be an understatement... I think maybe he was shocked or better yet has gone into shock.

He has this effect on people, enjoys it maybe. He wears a taciturn persona like a fighter wears war paint. To ward off people, to keep them as far away as possible.
It works.

I especially liked this part and then also It's history with teeth, literature that bites...
It causes these scenes to "pop" up in my mind as I am reading the chapter.