Reviews for Barely Breathing
DMBSJB18 chapter 1 . 1/15
Initially I was grumpy bc of how often Edward thought about how much Bella looked like Maggie. But then… it became so clear that he fell for her despite the fact that she looked like Maggie. Her looking like his dead wife was the catalyst that brought them together. But it thankfully ended there.
Maggie actually seemed to have a severe mental disorder. And I almost cried over what she put Edward through. No wonder he wallowed in misery for so long. He was a victim.
This story was beautiful. To watch both characters grow and heal was so lovely. Thank you for sharing
Zveka chapter 69 . 7/30/2022
Beautiful story, thank you for sharing
Jenycullen chapter 69 . 7/29/2022
Wow. I can’t even describe my emotions after reading this, I’m blown away.
Pattigirl23 chapter 1 . 6/15/2021
This is a really beautiful story, very well written. Thank you for sharing!
Kerrybm chapter 69 . 5/11/2021
Great story. Thanks for your beautiful words.
Guest chapter 69 . 4/29/2021
Beautiful story
JayNahNah chapter 69 . 4/13/2021
Beautiful
LayAtHomeMom chapter 69 . 3/23/2021
Absolutely loved this! Carrie ZM told me to read this forever ago and it was the perfect Spring Break read. Your writing is beautiful and I’m excited to check out your published works :)
Lay
divyvicki chapter 69 . 11/20/2020
Great story!
divyvicki chapter 60 . 11/9/2020
Loved this chapter!
divyvicki chapter 59 . 11/9/2020
Finally he is getting happy!
divyvicki chapter 58 . 11/9/2020
Such a sweet letter!
divyvicki chapter 57 . 11/9/2020
So sad he is going away!
divyvicki chapter 56 . 11/9/2020
Hoping they can heal each other!
divyvicki chapter 55 . 11/9/2020
Poor Edward!
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