Reviews for Barely Breathing
robertpatzlover09 chapter 69 . 2/11
damn that was good
shouldbecleaning chapter 69 . 2/6
One of the best ever stories on fanfiction.
jk chapter 57 . 1/27
What a selfish prick...its only a year...ilk be back...fuck that
renewagain chapter 69 . 1/19
That was lovely. Thank you.
barbta chapter 69 . 1/4
Love the ending. Sad that Alice cannot get over herself to be happy for her brother...but love the ending.
Amelia Mariee chapter 69 . 1/4
Just read this all in one day. Amazing story. Thank you !
Jen chapter 69 . 12/30/2014
I must admit, I haven't been commenting on anything lately. That being said, I needed to comment on your story. It is THAT GOOD. I loved your writing style. It takes talent to tell a story in such a visceral, sensory driven way. Thank you for sharing your talent! Brava!
boopgirl chapter 69 . 12/28/2014
Loved the ending
KimiD chapter 8 . 12/26/2014
A bit of intrigue has settled itself inside of her... wondering, Why he acted like that...
KimiD chapter 7 . 12/26/2014
I doubt he had a thing to do with his wife's death, but somehow he feels responsible. That whatever happened to her he felt helpless because he could not stop her from dying. His soul is torched because he was useless to keep her from leaving him...
KimiD chapter 6 . 12/26/2014
WHy to torture you of course why else would I be sitting in your class...
To make you think you have gone insane why else would I subject myself to your boarishness

Loved the comparison to Dorian Gray 'in the negative'
KimiD chapter 5 . 12/26/2014
Hmm, perhaps a clue... the pitter-patter of her HEALTHY heart
Could this be what cut the life of Maggie short, a bad heart...?
KimiD chapter 4 . 12/26/2014
Whoa he needs to get himself under control before he makes a Very Large mistake...
KimiD chapter 3 . 12/26/2014
Wow it's like looking at a ghost sitting in the front row... to say he is stunned would be an understatement... I think maybe he was shocked or better yet has gone into shock.
KimiD chapter 2 . 12/26/2014
He has this effect on people, enjoys it maybe. He wears a taciturn persona like a fighter wears war paint. To ward off people, to keep them as far away as possible.
It works.

I especially liked this part and then also It's history with teeth, literature that bites...
It causes these scenes to "pop" up in my mind as I am reading the chapter.
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