|Reviews for Barely Breathing|
| Guest chapter 69 . 8/2
Holy crap you are an amazing writer. Seriously, you have a gift. That was a brilliant, beautiful piece of writing. Haven't even checked yet to see if you've written anything else, but if you have, rest assured i'll be devouring it. Beautifull story. So dark at the beginning. Did not expect the HEA. But felt totally natural. Damn.
| kaja0507 chapter 1 . 6/30
Hi thanks for allowed Fungcycullen traslade this story it is so fantastic, i loved how Edward and Bella heal each other, my english it is not so good but i want thank you for this beatiful love story of my favorite book caracters.
| Anastacia T. Crawford chapter 1 . 6/30
OMG! I just read your story 'Barely Breathing' and ...Thank you, thank you, thank you so, so, so, so much for allowing the translation of this amazing story! I'm completely in love with it! You're a amazing author! and...I love your stories sweet girl.
I love YOU! XOXOXOX
| bella0609 chapter 20 . 6/28
Why is Maggie writing such things? Bad childhood or bad marriage...
| bella0609 chapter 19 . 6/27
And it starts...
| bella0609 chapter 18 . 6/27
Ah, man. I figured as much. You are always left asking questions when someone does that... never knowing what they were feeling - no closure per se.
| bella0609 chapter 17 . 6/27
Hmm... Edward should be there...
| bella0609 chapter 16 . 6/27
He's going to have to clean up his office - hehe
| bella0609 chapter 15 . 6/27
Is he stalking her now?
| bella0609 chapter 14 . 6/27
Hmmm...Mike is noticing too!
| bella0609 chapter 13 . 6/27
So a real change in Edward - just with a smile...
| bella0609 chapter 12 . 6/27
Bella has daddy issues...
| bella0609 chapter 11 . 6/27
so he not learning by his past mistakes...
| bella0609 chapter 10 . 6/27
Bella has just as strong "issues". Both of them need help...
| bella0609 chapter 9 . 6/27
He needs counseling.