Reviews for Barely Breathing |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Initially I was grumpy bc of how often Edward thought about how much Bella looked like Maggie. But then… it became so clear that he fell for her despite the fact that she looked like Maggie. Her looking like his dead wife was the catalyst that brought them together. But it thankfully ended there. Maggie actually seemed to have a severe mental disorder. And I almost cried over what she put Edward through. No wonder he wallowed in misery for so long. He was a victim. This story was beautiful. To watch both characters grow and heal was so lovely. Thank you for sharing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful story, thank you for sharing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. I can’t even describe my emotions after reading this, I’m blown away. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a really beautiful story, very well written. Thank you for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. Thanks for your beautiful words. |
![]() ![]() Beautiful story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely loved this! Carrie ZM told me to read this forever ago and it was the perfect Spring Break read. Your writing is beautiful and I’m excited to check out your published works :) Lay |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finally he is getting happy! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a sweet letter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So sad he is going away! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hoping they can heal each other! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Edward! |