|Reviews for Keeper's Taunt|
| Spellspinner777 chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
Sorry to mention this 2 the other reviewers but their is most definatly rhyme in it for example...
KNIGHT ~ LIGHT
HELM ~ REALM
I think that this was fantastically done. Ignore the fools
| Kitty Felone chapter 1 . 12/3/2004
I think the description in this little poem is wonderful! Don't listen to what "Tichondrius" hsa to say about it, not ALL poetry has to have a rhyme scheme. Just as long as the flow remains constant and a good description of the words is in use. I like this, so shall show it off.
| 1233122313441224142 chapter 1 . 3/16/2004
| Tichondrius chapter 1 . 9/9/2003
A well rounded critique is often the most rewarding tool for the writer.- no offence but theres not much rhythm or rhyme, its a bit random, I'm back from vacation, good knight.
?# ;?, eh? but its a good effort nonetheless, hope 2 read sum more of your stuff.
| Vick330 chapter 1 . 1/6/2003
Quite good, I don't know much about poetry, but this would look good somewhere in the game.
| randompalindrome chapter 1 . 12/27/2002
that cool, kind of lkke an advertisment for it
| Belial chapter 1 . 10/21/2002
Very good! Have you read mine?