Reviews for Life Left Behind
chimaera198 chapter 7 . 9/16/2014
Hey, my name is Chiara, which you pronounce as Kiara! What is stupid about that?
I actually like my name and if it is in real world hate names like, Angel, Boy, Cherish, Love etc.

I like your story anyway, but I would love to hear your reason for totally randomly throwing in that name...
raindownchaos chapter 8 . 8/17/2014
ehhhhh I loooooved it until harry and draco meet up again. The dialog just gets awkward.
Sara B chapter 14 . 6/18/2014
Absolutely perfect!
I enjoyed every single chapter
Fab characters: Francois,Draco and of course Joel
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Nana Xiang chapter 5 . 5/22/2014
this is why we love albus dumbledore!
Guest chapter 14 . 9/16/2013
Thank goodness for Happy Endings! I loved this story! It rocks!
milly.braithwaite chapter 14 . 8/30/2013
Awwwwwh! I absolutely love Cherish! This story was amazing! And Joel?! Oh my god! Vanilla flavoured pudding in the bath tub! I'm not sure if I loved this one or the first more! (I did read the Harry/Ron one...I can't get on with the idea...Harry n Draco belong together in my eyes...although it was a lot better than I could have done!)
Awh! Well, it's stupid o'clock, so time for me to read more of your amazing writing!...xxx
Holalatte chapter 14 . 7/14/2013
Muy Bien. Perfecto. This story is awesome mi amiga! esta es la mejor historia que he leído, ya que se inclina más a la realidad y la forma en que el OC se caracterizaron es el mejor que he visto. joel es divertido, humor era un buen toque a la historia, el equilibrio perfecto. In short the story was amazing!
Calemirneth Evans Potter chapter 6 . 6/1/2013
I wanna die laughing after I read people flame on children under 10 not knowing about human anatomy cuz I knew it since I was 7 ( a pervert I was!) so it's not a big deal! I enjoy the realism about your story and its not some fluff but actually have a plot. It really enjoyable to read. Okay I commented on this chapter, I'm going to continue on.
Lori94 chapter 14 . 8/2/2012
Wow! Crazy! Loved it! Dumbledore always did know everything!
Carla Balsinha chapter 14 . 12/22/2011
Olá,boa tarde!

I found this first chapters translated in my language,but i decided to find the real story and i didnt regret it!

A very good story,i enjoyed what i red!

Take care

Carla Cascão

Ps: Um Feliz Natal e um Excelente Ano Novo de 2012!
DELETEDFORGOODDDDDD chapter 8 . 12/19/2011
I love children but not Cherish, she's a total Mary Sue, you have her acting like a perfect little child, though she talks as if she were in her late teens. Just for future reference, know that children are children not teenagers, children get into mischif, they do things they shouldn't, they definitely don't talk about privet parts or sex.
DELETEDFORGOODDDDDD chapter 6 . 12/19/2011
My only complaint is how you portrayed Draco's OC daughter. I never learned about the female/male origins until I was in the 5th grade and I still really didn't know about sex. You have her acting as if she were a 16 year old girl. Do you not know any children? obviously you don't, even if a child at that age were very smart, they wouldn't be talking about a person's privet parts. It's disturbing.
Mila Pink chapter 14 . 12/4/2011
I loved your fic! It's brilliant, and I love this couple so much that everything about them is fantastic. Moments that had not really thought it would stay together. But all ended well.

Congratulations, and sorry not to comment on others.

kisses
XxLadyKikixX chapter 14 . 11/10/2011
Dam I wish I was part of this sense the beginning! I would have so much to type down on every chapter but sense it was already completed I had no choice but to go one anyway! It's good though that Melody knows and good that Draco got the life he needed not wanted NEEDED. Well okay a little (huge) wanting from him. Another note that is directed to Joel, you are effing awesome! What would we do without our awesome chef and prankster dad? He does have kids right? I don't feel like rereading sense I'm already typing all of this out. Anyway This is not much of a review sense you have like over 400, but all the same it's a review. By the way I thought Harry was going to explode that Draco went out to see Melody but that did not happen and I guess that't a good thing. Okay this review should be down soon unless I just start to ramble on and on. Anyway now it should be done. Awesome Job and well I'm putting you on alert.
BellaTrix chapter 2 . 8/11/2011
I really hope Draco does the right thing this time and lets his gf go before Harry shows up. It's not fair to her at all, how selfish he is being by not really being honest.
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