Reviews for Hinge of Fate
hermionefan1983 chapter 11 . 4/26/2013
hermionefan1983 chapter 11 . 4/26/2013
"Miss Granger?"

you cut to well after that proposal was made i mean what happened next after Hermione drew back her wandering wits and noticed that he had finished his meal. She swallowed hard and pushed the remains of her sandwich away. "I'm ready if you are, sir."

"Hermione." He reached out and stilled her hand as she made to leave the table. He seemed fascinated with their two hands on the heavy wooden table surface, and stared at them for several long moments.

"Will you marry me?"
hemrionefan29 chapter 10 . 4/26/2013
i thoguth apperating was like being sucked through a tube?! and what the FUCK is hermione doing apperating while pregnant!?

"This doesn't mean you're going to carry on as normal, Miss Granger. You'll have to make several adjustments. I'll send notes to your teachers, but the first change you'll make is no more potions testing. No dueling practices, no charms performed on you, and most definitely no transfigurations of your person. You're young and healthy, but turning yourself into a potted plant while you're pregnant is something not even Minerva would attempt. Far too dangerous."
hermionefan29 chapter 9 . 4/23/2013
Once outside the gate, Snape led her just a few yards further, then turned to her.

"Give me your hands," Snape requested, holding out his own. "I'll Apparate us to the taproom at the Leaky Cauldron."

"I thought we'd use a portkey," Hermoine said, confused and a little alarmed.

"I happen to be very good at Apparating, Miss Granger. You can trust me." His expression closed down, and Hermione had no trouble imagining to what use he'd put his skill in tandem Apparating while in Voldemort's service.

"I trust you," she told him simply, and put her cold bare fingers in his.

His dark eyes pinned her for a long moment, then his hands tightened on hers and he uttered the short spell that Apparated them to Diagon Alley.

i thought the midwitch said tht hermione isnt AT ALL meant to Apparate while pregnant?
hermionefan29 chapter 9 . 4/23/2013
is the bby strting to kick yet?
hermionefan29 chapter 9 . 4/23/2013
how come the students etc cant yet tell hermione is pregnant? "Need some more clothing, do you, Hermione?" questioned Madame Pomfrey as she left her office. "I'm surprised you've made it this long, my dear. You're nearly halfway now."

"Yes," admitted Hermione. "My blouses are getting too tight and none of my uniform skirts fasten properly. Everything's being held shut with loops of string."
hermionefan29 chapter 8 . 4/23/2013
"No one else is even remotely interested. I mean, Pomfrey's done it all before, and, well, Professor Dumbledore would hardly be concerned. And I can't show Ginny, or Harry, or Ron. Oh, I know I'm babbling." She approached him hesitantly, then side-stepped around him and went through the illusion wall to the Isolation ward.

why cant she share it with harry i mean harry knows she is pregnant and harry knows who the father is too!
hermionefan29 chapter 6 . 4/23/2013
"Hermione!" called Harry. "It's nearly time for class. Are you coming or not?"

"Actually, I am, but just this once more. I'm dropping out of Apparation."

"You're what?" demanded Ron. "You've been dying to take this class since the last time you fell off your broom!"

"And I'm never getting back on one, thanks the same."

i thought hermione had to drop Apparation class because she is pregnant so why is she going to this class? "Actually, I am, but just this once more. I'm dropping out of Apparation."
hermionefan29 chapter 4 . 4/23/2013
hermionefan29 chapter 4 . 4/23/2013
never been up at all hours changing nappies

i am glad you used the world nappies nather than diapers after all harry potter books are BRITISH not NOT american!
hemrionefan29 chapter 3 . 4/23/2013
"This doesn't mean you're going to carry on as normal, Miss Granger. You'll have to make several adjustments. I'll send notes to your teachers, but the first change you'll make is no more potions testing.

what about no potions making surely thats harmful to the baby what with the fumes from them?! will there be a squal to this story?
hermionefan29 chapter 2 . 4/22/2013
did if doesnt drink the abortion potions will she lose her head girls badge? "What am I going to do?" she asked softly, the anger giving way to panic once again. "Am I going to lose my Head Girl badge?" An absurd question, once she'd said it, but she was very proud of the badge. It was the symbol of everything she had worked for since she'd received her acceptance letter to Hogwarts.

"No, no," soothed Dumbledore. "I have spoken to Madame Pomfrey. There is a potion that can be made, which will cause you to miscarry." The elderly headmaster rose from his chair and went to his desk. "The potion requires several ingredients that by policy are not kept on Hogwarts grounds, however. It will take a day or so to obtain them. Also, Madame Pomfrey will need help to brew this."
AccaliaSnape chapter 22 . 4/18/2013
I came back to review this fic and got swept up in the story! Simply lovely, and a truly believable set up for SS/HG.

I will say I wouldn't have expected quite that many children from the pairing but I think you've made it work. I'd love to hear what happens with Victoria and Ron... ;)
AccaliaSnape chapter 10 . 4/18/2013
Oh my glob. WHAT DID WE EVER DO TO YOU! My father will hear about this!
AccaliaSnape chapter 8 . 4/18/2013
Oh my goodness- that scene with the sensitivity charm... I got goose bumps. Too. Perfect.
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