Reviews for Hinge of Fate
HermioneSnape1983 chapter 2 . 10/6/2018
So because they thought she was on the contraceptus potion they didn't think to give her the morning after potion?
HermioneSnape1983 chapter 1 . 10/6/2018
Why wasn't she give a morning after potion if they knew she was raped?
HermioneSnape1983 chapter 1 . 10/6/2018
Sequel?
natashaa78 chapter 22 . 9/14/2018
Wow I don’t know why I’ve put off reading this delightful novel. I loved it.
HpSnape chapter 1 . 9/11/2018
7 kids! Lord haha!
pridegrrl chapter 1 . 9/11/2018
I love this story so much! I've read it 3 times. Great work!
Guest chapter 14 . 9/6/2018
This was very well done. It depicts very well both of their strengths and weaknesses and, most important, doesn't delve into any emotional upheaval. It was more like a describing of facts, although done from Hermione's perspective. I say bravo!
Guest chapter 22 . 9/4/2018
Ramos, what a lovely story!i am amazed that you were able to write all this in a mere three and a half months—that is beyond incredible. The way you’re able to blend humor, romance, drama, and tension truly speaks to your talent. You are an incredibly gifted writer, and I hope you finally publish that book of yours someday!

The only suggestion I have—a minor one really—is editing. Once in a while a word like “ever” would appear as “every”. However, this story had overall few mistakes and a load full of love and drama. Best wishes, and God bless!
Guest chapter 6 . 8/4/2018
Butterbeer? Was that like real butter? They were already drinking when they were underage why can't she continue now that she is pregnant.
I also think she needed a better reason to continue that pregnancy. She is too smart to condemn herself, her future child and her education without a GOOD reason. "I feel like keeping it" is NOT one
LissaDream chapter 7 . 7/7/2018
Finished reading for the third time. Still love it as much as the first. Brava!
LissaDream chapter 7 . 7/7/2018
Finished reading for the third time. Still love it as much as the first. Brava!
LissaDream chapter 1 . 7/7/2018
Finished reading for the third time. Still love it as much as the first. Brava!
And FOREVER chapter 22 . 7/4/2018
this was so beautiful *.* thank you so much for this wonderful story! I hate that it's over T_T you did an amazing job!
And FOREVER chapter 18 . 7/1/2018
this has me so absorbed that I keep forgetting to review! still Loving every word of this story, it's beautiful *.*
And FOREVER chapter 12 . 7/1/2018
I've completely forgotten to review so far, I'm so sorry! this story has me sucked in, and I'm loving every second of it! it's amazing!
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