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hermionefan29 chapter 13 . 4/26/2013
you never said: what did severus swear to?
hermionefan29 chapter 13 . 4/26/2013
she could not remember the exact words the sorcerer used to ask her to swear herself to Severus, only that he had not spoken of love or romance, but rather loyalty, honor, and responsibility.

surely she should swear to those things too among other things? of love or romance, and he should swear to of love or romance, and loyalty, honor, and responsibility among other things too?!
hermionefan29 chapter 13 . 4/26/2013
did hermione remove the cloak? and they are getting married BY THE GATE? surely they can move more in to the garden than THAT?!
hermionefan29 chapter 13 . 4/26/2013
"You know, it's odd," her friend said. "Snape looks a bit like Victor Krum."

"Oh, really now!" Hermione objected, collecting her scattered wits.

"No, really! Victor was tall, and had dark hair, and he had a big nose," Ginny pointed out.

"Victor Krum walked like a duck," Hermione retorted, thinking of Severus Snape's stealthy, silent stride. "Not to mention he couldn't brew a potion to save his life! All he ever wanted was to play Quidditch and design brooms. You know, I broke up with him when he kept asking me about charms to make his broom go faster!"

SEVERUS SNAPE looks walks etc NOTHING like that victor krum guy!
hermionefan29 chapter 13 . 4/26/2013
A light tapping came at Hermione's door, and the young women looked at each other.

"Bugger," swore Ginny, dropping the strands of hair to dangle around Hermione's face as she went to open the door.

A deep voice on the other side of the door, quietly asking to see her, told Hermione who it was. Pulling her bathrobe more tightly around herself, she went to stand beside Ginny, who discreetly withdrew.

"Good morning," Severus told her.

"Good morning," she replied, somewhat shyly.

hermionefan29 chapter 12 . 4/26/2013
With great deliberation, Severus brought her hands to his mouth and kissed each one, his lips warm and soft on the backs of her fingers before leaning forward and kissing her gently on the forehead.

how about snape kissing her lips again? mmmmmm i would give ANYTHING to have that mans lips on ME!
hermionefan29 chapter 12 . 4/26/2013
what does all that mean? EXACTLY? : Severus took a hefty swig of his brandy and settled into his chair. "Well. Let me hear it," he said.

The Headmaster didn't answer immediately. Instead he leaned forward and poured himself a hefty splash of brandy before leaning back into his chair. His gaze slid to his familiar, who sat preening his red and gold plumage, showering sparks on the carpet. Fawkes looked up at his master, and wizard and bird seemed to nod at each other. He took a breath and began.

"On the day the Dark Lord betrays his most loyal servant, the era of the phoenix shall end. His feathers will burn without rebirth. The sword of Gryffindor will break. The blood of Harry Potter will pour out on the earth, And the Eaters of Death shall fall upon the world."

Severus opened his mouth in a silent gasp, but words were beyond him; even breathing seemed beyond him.
hermionefan29 chapter 12 . 4/26/2013
like i said "She is an eminently sensible young woman," Dumbledore told him. "If nothing else, the Shrieking Shack could be made a livable refuge. Perhaps with a personal tutor to continue her schooling, she would be persuaded to be reasonable."

Severus wasn't sure he'd heard the Headmaster clearly, and on reflection decided the comment on a 'personal tutor' surely couldn't have been a double entendre.

and also how is the shrieking shack safe as a a livable refuge for her being is so accecaple to others?
hermionefan29 chapter 12 . 4/26/2013
how many languages does hermione speak fluently? and surely the baby is more important than er education or potter? "You'll have a hard time convincing her to leave her schoolwork. Or Potter," he added as an afterthought, for once not sneering at the boy's name.

also would snape being her apprenticeship master would be a bad idea for her educational vise considering who snape is to her! he is the father o her baby "The offer of an apprenticeship is still open, Hermione," he continued. "If you find yourself unwilling to commit to university study, a formal apprenticeship with an acknowledged master carries the same and in some cases more weight as a university degree."

"I'm considering that, too," she told him, concentrating on her work. She did not see the faint smile that appeared at her comment before he returned to his own tasks.
hermionefan29 chapter 12 . 4/26/2013
how many languages does Severus Snape speak fluently?
hermionefan1983 chapter 11 . 4/26/2013
why hasnt hermione remebered yet about what happened on hallowen (the rape etc) i mean the headmaster remover the memory spell from her AGES ago (just after she first found out she is pregnant) and yet she STILL doesnt remeber it!? WHY?
hemrionefan29 chapter 12 . 4/26/2013
is the baby moving more now? It was moments like this she found herself seriously considering his proposal, when the atmosphere between them was comfortable and the baby in her womb kicked and turned complacently.
hermionefan1983 chapter 11 . 4/26/2013
hermionefan1983 chapter 11 . 4/26/2013
"Miss Granger?"

you cut to well after that proposal was made i mean what happened next after Hermione drew back her wandering wits and noticed that he had finished his meal. She swallowed hard and pushed the remains of her sandwich away. "I'm ready if you are, sir."

"Hermione." He reached out and stilled her hand as she made to leave the table. He seemed fascinated with their two hands on the heavy wooden table surface, and stared at them for several long moments.

"Will you marry me?"
hemrionefan29 chapter 10 . 4/26/2013
i thoguth apperating was like being sucked through a tube?! and what the FUCK is hermione doing apperating while pregnant!?

"This doesn't mean you're going to carry on as normal, Miss Granger. You'll have to make several adjustments. I'll send notes to your teachers, but the first change you'll make is no more potions testing. No dueling practices, no charms performed on you, and most definitely no transfigurations of your person. You're young and healthy, but turning yourself into a potted plant while you're pregnant is something not even Minerva would attempt. Far too dangerous."
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