Finally! They speak, they tough, kiss and have expressed their want for each other. And finally she can stop calling him Sir and Mr. Masen in private anyway. And Bella is standing up for herself, with people like Rose and Edward and letting her voice be heard.
I'm still worried that Bella is confiding in Victoria too much.

I still don't know why he's so attracted to Bella. This dinner and him giving a little of his growing up years was great, we finally get a look into what makes him him. But what makes Bella so interesting? I mean she's got some talent he's sure is great and wants to help her achieve even more greatness. But I don't know enough about Bella and Mr. Masen to know why they are attracted to each other and what the problem is, because something is holding them back. I assumed it was the age difference plus he's her boss...idk, something is missing.

So what changed Mr. Masen's mind? Was it seeing Bella with Laurent and he just couldn't let someone else have her because right or wrong he wanted her himself? Hey HE kissed her this time. Whiplash anyone?

Oh sweet timid Bella just goes for it...teases him and then plants one on him. She's only 19, I'm
guessing he's feeling guilty because he's older and should know better than to return that kiss and
get caught with being turned on by her. What was she thinking throwing herself on him like that and
then to run after him?!
While I'm mentioning her age...I take it she's not attending college, that this career is taking the place of a college education? The thought just entered my mind.

Flowers, from Mr. Masen, secretly sent too. Hum...how can Bella keep from asking him what's up.

For someone who works in an industry that requires good health, I'm surprised is a smoker.
So Bella has all this pressure put on her from all directions, and now Rose warning her against trying to get Emmett I wonder how Bella is going to stand up to it all. And she's had problems with anorexia...that's a lot to handle.

Laurent can see what Bella can not. Mr. Masen is more than a mentor. I need more details as to why he's so smitten with her.

It's odd that Victoria seems to be forcing Bella in Mr. Masen's presence. I'm wondering if Victoria is
up to no good? The pressure really seems to be building because of . What is up with him?

Is Bella getting these opportunities to dance because of just her skill or is Mr. Masen giving her these
parts because of something else?

I'm so curious why Edward is so captivated by Isabella so quickly. It seems as if he already knows her or perhaps he's attracted to her in the love at first sight way? Can't wait to get into what he's all about. And Bella's family sounds refreshingly different. A man-whore Charlie? Ha, love it. And Seth is
so sweet, a 16 year old who thinks enough of his sister to buy her earrings? Nice.

Great story, I really enjoyed reading it!

Wow, I just found this story and completed it within a few hours! It's was soooo good and so original. I loved all of the ballet aspects of the story. Great job! Looking forward to reading the outtakes or possibly even a futuretake!

Holy moly! I just spent the last two days reading this fabulous story! Can I just say I am so glad I started when I did because I think I would have died if I had to wait for updates! This is BY FAR the best fan fiction I have read in ages. I love ballet (though I never danced it) and I love Edward and Bella. This was the best of both worlds. And the writing was SUPERB. (Sorry for all the caps, that's just how in love I am with this story!) I am definitely going to have to go through and do a re read soon, that's how much I love it. Please please tel me you are working on other fics?! I would be a loyal follower for life. Seriously :) thanks for sharing your beautiful words with us. Thank you for all the time and effort you have put into this. You are an amazing writer and I look forward to reading more from you

Absolutely loved this!

You told a beautiful story. Thank you for sharing and I hope you get inspired to continue.