Come on tell us what Rosalie’s reasoning was.

Well it was bound to happen everyone knowing but what Rosalie did was cruel and stalkerish too. Let see w they handle it going forward. They are not the first or last ingenue and artistic director to pas de doux.

Rosalie and her girls or Laurent?

Bella should get her own apartment then maybe her parents well meaning or not would mind their own business. Or at least not be all up in hers. Laurent is so like Jake argh! Needless to say I hate Rosalie generally so…

I always felt ballet was so hard for the women. We had to be so small, light, strong and yet feminine at the same time and the men get to have impossibly sexy, strong muscled bodies. Le sigh. Edward coming to get her was so protective and jealous EdwardD but Bella does need to be careful that is a role of a lifetime. This is a. balancing act.

Renee is a successful doctor and she is still pushy and nosy. Haha. I like thst you really mixed things up here. I hope Bella blows these performances out of the water and prove them all wrong even Maks.

Yes! We have lift off.

I miss ballet. I had the passion and the feet but hurt my knee. Ah youth. I love this story. It seems Laurent is the desperate Jacob of this tale. Hes pretty obvious just not to Bella. Edward is truly the sexy Artistic Director. Well done.

What a beautiful story. I did feel very nostalgic multiple times. I haven't worn my Pointe shoes in a decade but I felt like I was up on that stage with Bella because of your writing. Incredibly well written. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thank you, for sharing. I loved reminiscing, and loved these characters too.

I was in a ballet company a decade ago, so I'm very intrigued to read this story. it has immediately captured my attention. can't wait to dive in and experience some nostalgia!

This was amazing! Thank you :)

good story ..

Oh my god, this story was so amazingly good! I don’t have the words, but everything was so beautifully executed. The pacing was perfect, the gradual build up, the tension and drama… 100/10, fantastic work!

Just re-read for the nth time, still loving it!

I wish Swan Lake starring Bella Swan would be a real thing aha. Adored this story line! Constantly looking up performances on YouTube to help visualize! It seems super challenging to write about dance and you’ve done it so beautifully here! Thank you for the lovely read 3