Reviews for Balançoire
TrustyCupcake chapter 1 . 2/11/2018
Thank you so much for this wonderful story! I'm a big Ballet lover and I loved this fic.
Btw, there's this butthurt guest reviewer that's been spamming your stories. Please don't let those kind of reviews upset you. After all, haters gonna hate. Your stories are amazing.
Best of luck!
forkswa chapter 1 . 1/11/2018
This story is one of my all time favorites I have ever read. I finsihed it about a year ago but I still come back to reread. I’m always left feeling a little unfulfilled at the end because I want to see so much more from this Edward and Bella! Are you still going to post outtakes and Edward’s POV? I hope you are. You did an amazing job with this story.
Guest chapter 17 . 1/8/2018
Tell me I did not just fight my way through 17 very boring chapters and bad grammar just to learn that Edward fucked Bella BEST FRIEND FROM TWILIGHT for YEARS...what the fuck?
Guest chapter 13 . 1/8/2018
anemia isn't really indicative of a fucking eating disorder...but whatever. Bella is an adult she shouldn't have to "see someone" to gain six pounds...just fucking eat you dumb bitch.

and she thinks Edward is a good man? Mr ive fucked my fair share trust me? Mr I'm a total douche bag...all the time?

I HATE your version of Edward...im either calling him sisward, pussward, or patsyward.
Guest chapter 8 . 1/8/2018
Edward asked if bella was "accommidating to her role" do you mean acclimating? That was just weird...just like he wanted bella to step over her own hip...I was like ...wtf?
Guest chapter 3 . 1/8/2018
I'm confused...she wasn't ready to audition for swan lake because she thought she was already in the corps and was going to be auditioning for swan lake?

HUH? And if Edwards approval is more important then actual jobs why doesn't she just audition to be his whore and get it over with? Bella is fucking pathetic.
Guest chapter 2 . 1/8/2018
I don't get it...bella practiced her audition routine FOR A YEAR! Only to crap out when it counted? What a piece of shit.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/8/2018
Edward is a ...ballet dancer? How manly. Ballet of course takes extreme dedication, if you want to be good. And it takes even more to actually get paid for dancing. But you have to wonder, what type of boy decides he wants to be a ballet dancer. My first thought is he must be gay, or have gay tendencies. Then I'm thinking he must want to be a woman. Now that I know is rather cruel because of course a straight man could want to be a ballet dancer. But still the voice persists. Its a strange field for a man. And just as women are brought up to envy and reach the ideal beauty, we are also taught that men should be men. I guess it was well ingrained because I already see Edward as a sissy bitch wearing tights.
charbronte chapter 26 . 1/7/2018
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charbronte chapter 27 . 1/7/2018
Beautiful story!
rat19 chapter 20 . 12/12/2017
I think Bella behaved spoilt when wanting to break up from Edward, but looking fwd to next chapter :)
rat19 chapter 17 . 12/12/2017
Well played! I enjoyed the way you twisted Angela’s role in Edward’s life, but I wish Bella could have taken a bit of time to process the information. I guess she lacks the sense of self-presevation here too ;)
Cold Roses chapter 27 . 11/1/2017
Hi Andreea, I just read your story straight in two days and really enjoyed it so much! Your characters were always believable, your feeling for the right words just perfect. I'm not a big fan of ballet, but I love when people are passionate about something they love and the passion was so infectious that I want to go to some theatre right away.
What I missed was Bella and Edward dancing together at least once. I think I would have enjoyed that very much, although I loved that you gave Bella another dancing partner in the story.
What wasn't solved til the end was the smoking issue. I had the feeling it was an issue for Bella so I was hoping they would be able to solve it. Especially since she was making an effort to keep her health in check and well... he didn't. Not really.
Thank you for writing this and spending so much time in making this story a wonderful read.
JustAnotherGal chapter 27 . 10/25/2017
Beautiful! Enjoyed it immensely!
Guest chapter 27 . 10/4/2017
I dont particularly like ballet. In fact, i avoid it. I get bored with it pretty fast.
However, i really loved your fic. I loved the passion, the development of the characters, the love between them (not only bella and edward), the way edward treats bella, how you wrote about anorexia without making it seems just as a illness but also something you have to fight everyday,...
I am really happy i came across your. You are a womderful writter
(sorry about the typos in the review)
Congrats,
Namine1993
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