Reviews for Balançoire |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i really really love your story and your way of writing.. my only objection is that edward's past is still really heavy for him..like he still lives in it.. when a person lives in his past how can he really be free to love another and make a present and a future? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it thank you I went back and read it all not just the last few thank you I fell in love with it all over again |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's a lovely written story. I thought their age difference would raise trouble, but you teach me better. I can't believe what a terrible person Rosalie is. I had wished they would sort things out but unfortunately this wish stayed refused. I have seen swan lake in the past and could totally feel with the performance you just described. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome work Great job :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice. Well written. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting, Edward tells Bella that Angela ruled his life both on and off the stage and that he regrets it and that it has left him bitter, yet I see him doing exactly the same thing to Bella. He's always telling her what she can and cannot do in her own time, to what she should be eating, what she should weigh, who she can and cannot trust to be her friends, what she should be wearing - it's relentless and it was annoying me no end - but to now know Angela was the same with him, the whole scenario is ringing big alarm bells for me. Same situation, older person who should know better, younger person falling in love quickly for their mentor who pretty much rules their life. I hope Edward doesn't end up hurting Bella deliberately, but I think it's going to happen regardless; add Rosalie and Laurent into the mix (and I don't really trust Victoria either) and I can see a world of pain coming for Bella. |
![]() ![]() I've read this story so many times and it never gets old. The ending is perfect and sweet, you can feel the happiness and joy the future will bring, let's forget the bad stuff lol, it'd be really nice to have some outtakes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a wonderful story ! I love Bella as a dancer ! This was a great idea! I really really their relationship here! Thank you so much for sharing this with us ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just read this and I must say it is amazing! I stayed up all night and finished it! Thank you! |
![]() ![]() GREAT STORY |
![]() ![]() Just finished :) Great fic. Thank you for sharing it. I don't normally read dance fics but this was great.. And informative! Love your other fics as well. :) Take care. ~Rebekah |
![]() ![]() ohhhh please don't let it be Vicky, bella needs a friend... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved your story. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It is a very good fiction. Thank you. Kisses |