Reviews for Undisclosed Desires
Shona.x chapter 1 . 10/7/2014
OMFG! I so hope you do turn this into a full story and pick up from the scene you left off. Seeing Lauren and Joey build a relationship and learning of their backgrounds, seeing everyone's reaction, maybe a bit of Lucy Beale revenge :o Seriously, this was absolutely incredible! The only reason i'm disappointed is because it ended. This has so much potential. If you do decide to make it a full story you will definitely have my support. :) Xxx
Eastend Gal chapter 1 . 4/13/2014
Aww such an adorable,suspense filled fanfic
If you would write it as a full story I would be delighted to read it labsoloutly amazing work
Kinda wish I was Lauren actually grr but it was very realistic in every way I could just imagine the wedding scene in my head lovely
chloem93 chapter 1 . 4/8/2014
Aww loved this so soo good! So glad he called the wedding off. Was not excepting lauren to be there at all I was just as shocked as he was I think. Would love this as full story but looking forward to reading sins of the father first x
Guest chapter 1 . 4/8/2014
But diffrent but I luved it
Guest chapter 1 . 4/7/2014
Where do you get all your great ideas and then to have the talent to turn them into such great stories, one
better than the other, i have read all your Joey/Lauren stories and i can honestly say i have loved every
one of them including this one, keep up the great writing never stop.
lovelove94 chapter 1 . 4/7/2014
I'm sorry i haven't reviewed on your stories in a while but i plan on catching up with Sins of a father soon
I loved this so much.. i hope you do decide to make it into a full story at some point xx
KlarolinexDelenaxx chapter 1 . 4/7/2014
loved it, i half expecting then to turn out to be cousins and definitely when you mentioned that Lauren don't get surnames in the client book just first names, anyway who knows maybe they are related and if you continue in the future it will be revealed
Kayakrum chapter 1 . 4/7/2014
OMG please continue this, it's amazing!
popscb chapter 1 . 4/7/2014
:D I loved this so so much ! They are naughty ! I'm so glad he called the wedding off I had a feeling Lauren was going to be there, this would be so interesting as a full story ! Loved it again xxx
Naz x chapter 1 . 4/7/2014
Awwwww this is too amazing. I hope one day you can make this one shot into a story because you can't stop it there. Loved im this one shot xxx
LauraJean1992 chapter 1 . 4/7/2014
Different, but a good different. Loved this!
Wilhelm Wigworthy chapter 1 . 4/7/2014
Thanks for posting. This is an excelent example of quality work. Keep on updating!
Eastendersfan444 chapter 1 . 4/7/2014
I loved it... I love all of your stories as you know ..I am your BIGGEST fan and the LOUDEST cheerleader!

Really hope this becomes a story too xx