|Reviews for Ambrose & Sons|
| Duchess67 chapter 7 . 4/27/2014
They saved the day again. :)
| Duchess67 chapter 5 . 4/20/2014
That's just creepy! *shuddering here*
Why are there line breaks in their dialogue with each other? *curious* It makes it look like you'll be jumping to another scene, but you aren't.
| Duchess67 chapter 3 . 4/14/2014
Oh that's creepy! What happens next?
Just an fyi for you, I suggest putting in breaks to show time has passed. Doing it like you are, it makes it look like the passage of time for Donna in the Library computer. Get what I mean? If nothing else, put in extra spaces between one scene or set of events, and another.
| Duchess67 chapter 2 . 4/12/2014
This is actually starting to look familiar. Have you posted it anywhere else? *curious*
| Elayne1999 chapter 2 . 4/12/2014
I like your style of writing so far! And I will follow this story. It seems to become very good! ;)
| Duchess67 chapter 1 . 4/8/2014
*g* A bit short, but a cute start. So what's next? *curious*