|Reviews for When Signing a Contract, Always Read the Fine Print|
| LoreVarnes chapter 42 . 9/5
Fantastic, one of the best gamer style titles I have ever read.
| LoreVarnes chapter 12 . 9/4
Nice Monty Python reference, with the unladen swallow. Really love the fic.
| kuro02 chapter 14 . 9/1
loving the anko and naruto devolopment
| arsalan.rex chapter 6 . 8/28
into chap 6 n all that I read was how he learnt seduction... its NOT a serious story...
| the epicslime chapter 24 . 8/12
Hi I'm sorry put I'm stopping here I do not like the party system idea never have never will i was okay with it with just foks and shikmaru but having more people find out sorry just no stop you might as well have everyone in the world know and be done with it other than that it was well written and I saw/had no problems with it have a nice day byebye c u laytur adios and all that jizz
| xoxo Sweetie chapter 11 . 7/31
I like your story. It is a lot different from all "the gamer" stories that i read. I just do not care about Fu. To my, in this story, she seems so... flat. I'm sure that it you change. But so far she is... meh to me.
| Guest chapter 24 . 7/18
Your Naruto is a stupid weakling who don't know how to take advantage of the game.
| Arsenal chapter 4 . 7/18
And here is where I stop reading. It would have been nice of you to put into the disclaimer that this would focus more on getting girls than becoming more powerful. You wasted my time. Thanks for that
| Arsenal chapter 3 . 7/18
I was entertained. But then yo ugo and have his goal as romantic at heart. What a waste of good premise. I wanted to see him grow stronger and more mature. I dont want to see him waste his time on pursuit of girls.
| CelebTil chapter 32 . 7/17
you could have Shikamaru find a CHAT command in the guidebook for long distance communication/PM's when Naruto wants to talk to his friends.
| The Real Chys Lattes chapter 5 . 7/17
"Big black guy"... Bee's actually Native, not Black.
| Geistervogel chapter 42 . 6/23
Thanks for the great Story :) Was a bit wired out with the Storytitel. Got a picture in mind about the Story had the picture smashed and enjoyed myself reading this Story Start to finish from evening till 6:30 in the morning. Thanks god its sunday! Love and cheers
| Neoacoya1 chapter 42 . 5/31
I know this story has been completed for years, but I just want to say that the epilogue here was one of the best ones I've ever read. It was a joy and a privilege to have read your story. Thank you.
| kuraitja chapter 1 . 5/21
very interesting, i saw this before but the summary put me off, but i was bored and decided to read this. i am happy with my choice now.
| CMVreud chapter 9 . 5/3
You know what an awesome team-up would have been? Omoi and Shikamaru.
Omoi going apeshit overthinking things and Shikamaru keeping track of things that may happen and forming counter stategies to.