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![]() ![]() ![]() I agree. Are we just going to assume Naruto is going to become Hokage or survive long enough to be Hokage by himself? No connections with his peers who he can unequivocally trust? No, he needs supporters. He is one man. Minato had the support of Jiraiya (Sanninpolitical and professional clout), Kushina (Jinchuuriki, last of Uzumaki clanpolitical clout) and significant achievements (political and pro clout). He earned the respect of clans by more than likely saving their members during the war and becoming a hero. |
![]() ![]() ![]() COME ON WHY |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yep, still as good as I remembered. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, I’m back here. Thank you for having written this, hopefully it’s just as good on the 6th pass! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked the story when it started but now I’m just confused and lost because you have to much going on and i can barely keep track. Gotta say though that Iwa would never come to Konoha, gotta assume that they would still be mad about the war that happened less than 2 decades ago. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You made the world of Naruto worst than it was than when it started in this story. You almost started the 4th ninja war that quick. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Did the gamer ability make Naruto weaker, because it seems like he got weaker? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don’t really get how you can be forced out of your own mind. I mean if you don’t know it’s your mind then i guess that’s okay but you should realize that it’s sealed in you so this is inside of your body. So im the one in control here not kurama. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a great story and an awesome experience to enjoy. it even expla This is a great story and an awesome experience to enjoy. it even explained the underlying mechanics of the game and went into other genres. it was a different take on the gamer fanfics and all the more refreshing for it |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was amazing. While it may have had a rough patch or two it pulled through and managed to have one of the greatest endings I have read in all fanfiction. congratulations, and thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m back for perhaps a fifth time. Yay, I guess? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can say with a smile on my face that I enjoyed this, the gaming mechanics at first felt odd to me but as it went on it got better. Nice Epilogue too. I will have a gentlemanly life after reading this, hope you have an Oblivious one :) IJ the oblivious one |
![]() ![]() ![]() You evil gentleman you! Ha!I'd probably read one of your other stories after this, the shadow clone paperwork one sonds interesting... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Naruto... I say this because I care about you ok?... GIVE UP ON THAT PINK HAIRED FANGIRL BITCH! IT AIN'T GONNA HAPPEN YOU ORANGE FUCK! ... there's plenty of girls you could go for my friend. IJ the oblivious one |
![]() ![]() ![]() Filler: Well I'd probably say it's an episode where events that aren't entirely relevant to the main story or plot. Where the characters get a rare chance to relax. Like that Beach episode on Bleach where they fought watermelon monsters, made sand sculptures and built a memorial for Ukitake... IJ the oblivious one |