| Reviews for Maybe a Dream |
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  Thatguy chapter 30 . 8/24 Are you a girl Cuz it awfully seems like you made the MC a guy but you wanted to make a girl MC and now your just making everything about them awfully feminine Like I was cool with enrolling him into the kunoichi classes but now they're permanent and all the boys have to attend them now which is stupid honestly, since not all girls have to attend them There's also making him look like a girl, then the weight training which will stifle his growth making him have a smaller stature If your a guy I think you've got some really repressed G3nd3r dysphoria stuff going on, get. Help |
| Guest chapter 18 . 5/15 The problem with this story is simple. This is the kind of MC that would never under any circumstances survive in the Narutoverse and he is still alive here only because the author forces the plot and is not even trying to make it less obvious. |
 Child of Dreams chapter 39 . 4/15 Nope. |
| lovecat chapter 44 . 2/14 hi you are really amazing writer and it plethora to read your fanfic |
| Burakkumi chapter 30 . 10/15/2023 Why is he constantly telling other people how to beat him? Why is he so openly sharing his technique's weaknesses? |
| KingOfEmptyness chapter 12 . 6/28/2023 ok |
| Little-Red711 chapter 4 . 6/14/2023 the world would still move on with out himas it did I'm the manga I thought he would be more focus on surviving |
| Ricee chapter 3 . 4/11/2023 the fic itself isn't bad but the fact that it's separated into 1.2k chapters is really annoying |
| Pinkie Pie chapter 50 . 4/10/2023 Tazuna? |
| Guest chapter 26 . 1/8/2023 He got layed out by hinata. WTF |
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/29/2022 It was enjoyable for the most part but the ground that held it togther seemed to fall apart near the end, with guns, obito and such. Snake pedo kinda nade sense since he canonically murdered the 3rd for shits and giggles so i don't see why he wouldn't be a allie for easier 3rd kill, funky eyes and wacky kid |
| Guest chapter 17 . 11/12/2022 And in what fucking way does he even resemble orochi? So every quit lonely intelligent kid is orochi point 2? Hated by jiraiya? Mistrusted by others? Retard. |
| Guest chapter 17 . 11/12/2022 yeah what I wrote doesn't even do it justice because holy fuck this is bad. Please just remove it or something so other innocent readers doesn't have to se trash likes this . |
| Guest chapter 15 . 11/12/2022 holy fucking christ dude get your head out of your ass what a bunch of shit. |
| Guest chapter 14 . 11/12/2022 and again with all this stupid shit. retard |