Reviews for Maybe a Dream
MarkOfGod chapter 53 . 6/5/2014
The way you characterize Haru and his interaction with the others makes for a pretty intriguing story, especially with the widespread effects that his presence is causing to the overall timeline of Naruto. Although it's a bit late, I also like how your picture changes to match his growth over time (the eyepatch was a nice touch).
Te Ne'tra Mand'alor chapter 53 . 6/5/2014
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Yeah... I got nothing.
Izumikii chapter 53 . 6/5/2014
You're awesome , you always update really soon . Thank you!
Te Ne'tra Mand'alor chapter 50 . 6/5/2014
I'm going to say this once, cuz it's been driving me crazy (note this is a personal pet peeve of mine _; ). Cut your hair! It's just one big grapple point that's begging to be exploited. On the battlefield proper grooming can be the difference between life an death.

Okay done rant.
BloodDDB chapter 53 . 6/5/2014
I loved this chapter! The ending was so fun!
Winter's Folly chapter 53 . 6/5/2014
Wow. That was... realistic. I could totally see that happening too.
Winter's Folly chapter 52 . 6/5/2014
Aww...
Uncertain Shifter chapter 53 . 6/5/2014
LMAO! So Haru now has Haku as a kind of butler?
Mortimer Grimm chapter 53 . 6/5/2014
Kudos, man, KUDOS! Best characterisation of Haku I've read in a long time! :D
delete this acccount please chapter 53 . 6/5/2014
Lol. Sakura a closet pervert. ;)
Gremlin Jack chapter 53 . 6/5/2014
Oh come on, there is no way Haru did not figure out why Sakura just passed out. Also, that last bit was hilarious coming out of nowhere.
Kyprioth chapter 53 . 6/5/2014
Pffffft!( if there are any typos I blame you; you make me laugh too much!)
I can't wait to see ino's reaction to the competition.(dying of laughter.)
Kakashi's eye twitch.
Sasuke ...
It seems the muses already favor you,
-Kip
KeiraPhenix chapter 53 . 6/5/2014
BAHAHAHHAAA! Sakura's reaction- PRICELESS!
Devil Reader chapter 53 . 6/5/2014
I'm going to say that there is a 50-50 percent chance that Haku is going to try to kill Haru in revenge for Zabuza or Haku is going to die in front of Haru in some tragic scene of regret and loss. It's too silly of a setup otherwise. Although it's still a crazy and therefore a funny scenario.
PCheshire chapter 53 . 6/5/2014
hahahaha damn this is hilarious!
I'm still hoping that this is bl...
nice one with the nosebleed
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