| Reviews for Maybe a Dream |
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   Zana20 chapter 16 . 5/21/2014 Poor Ebisu! I thought he will have heart attack! |
| Zana20 chapter 15 . 5/21/2014 What does smoke pellet mean fro Haru? |
| Zana20 chapter 14 . 5/21/2014 Naruto is so easy to trick now. Promice him Ramen and he will do anything. |
| Zana20 chapter 13 . 5/21/2014 Yes, I am agree, girls are strange some time! |
| Zana20 chapter 12 . 5/21/2014 Naruto is so sweet! He will never forget his first present! |
| Zana20 chapter 11 . 5/21/2014 The dialogs are brilliant! |
| Zana20 chapter 10 . 5/21/2014 Yamanaka's are written very realistic! |
| Zana20 chapter 9 . 5/21/2014 Haru is very clever! And I like that he also is very realistic character. |
| Zana20 chapter 8 . 5/21/2014 So he try to find job? Clever Haru! |
| Zana20 chapter 7 . 5/21/2014 I absolutely adore how you write little Naruto and Haru |
| Zana20 chapter 6 . 5/21/2014 Love how you write dialogs between kids. |
| Zana20 chapter 5 . 5/21/2014 Naruto is so adorable! |
| Zana20 chapter 4 . 5/21/2014 I love how you describe kids and adults in this chapter! |
| Zana20 chapter 3 . 5/21/2014 Good chapter too. Good description of the orphanage. |
| Zana20 chapter 2 . 5/21/2014 Love this chapter too. My personal liking is how your chapters constracted. You have good start, main part and ending. Well done :-) |