Whoa - very abrupt transition into this scene. Took me off guard.

Kind of crazy! Looking forward to how he gets out of this, now that he's openly acknowledged 'future' knowledge

Kabuto's definitely onto Haru.

brilliant! all of this is just awesome!

Another short, but good chapter. If you didn't put these out so fast i would complain more, but you do update pretty fast. Thanks!

Cute ending!

Liked the interactions with the Hyuugas. Hanabi's a cutie (when she's not being mean to Hinata :P)

See this update as soon as I got up in the morning cheered me greatly

You my friend are awesome I can't wait to see what your going to do next!

I found this chapter awesome and hilarious, you've got a wicked awesome sense of humour. Please keep on writing this fantastic story.

Awwwww! o

Ranma reference rofl. And clueless...

I really like this story. I also like your character. He's a bit too eager to placate anyone, but then he does kind of have the hammer of god constantly waiting to swing down on his head for any perceived transgression. Keep up the great work. I look forward to your next chapter.

wow, I love this! My mind was contemplating that recently..why wouldn't you remember other animes?

nooooooooooooooooooo
i will realy love your OC
yeah i wa thinking of some Yaoi but well good luck

This is actually pretty good! LOL Kenshin reference! Kingdom Hearts reference! and omgosh the best bit: using data encryption theory to revolutionise genjutsu! I love what you're doing. Keep it up :)

Nice chapter! Like the silly banter at the beginning.
You dropped a word in the sentence with "unjustifiably at the kid".

Looking forward to seeing what happens at the Hyuugas and with Kabuto. Would be cool if he could co-opt him somehow.
Poor Ino. They haven't even hit puberty yet though, so definitely not going to be anywhere close to his radar

Thanks for writing!