This story is so awesome!

insanely good story... insanely good.

unlike other stories i enjoyed, i won't be adding this to my favorites.
while i did indeed like what you created, i do not like the direction its headed, and will stop reading from this point on.
but i felt the need to leave at least something, that why i wrote this review.
i hope in the future i'll come across more of your stories.

O.O...Dude, intense...

Sorry I read all your story in one go, now I realize I should have left more reviews along the way :/

Good story

Did Kabuto mean for Haru to see his sadness, or does he really just want a companion/friend/accomplice?When you think about it Kabuto's life is a bit lonely.

Okay wtf is he gonna do with a jar eyeballs?

There have been a few authors that have pointed out that Kabuto is so messed up that when he's younger anyone who knew his history could have made him their permanent ally. I don't exactly remember what they said it was he valued (it was in 'The save button is your friend') it might have been trust or something like that.

Now that he's got the Sharingan what's he going to do with it? Use them for himself, bargain them away to others?

:L dude I would have thought he would be smarter then that to blurt out that to ino or like in general anyone else. Who knows who's watching the academy children or lurking around in general especially since everyone knows that he's a suspicious person.

Anyway thanks for updating.

nice

Great chapter, loved it!

My shipping's sense is tingling.

Amazing story.

So since Naruto wasn't a plucky underdog that Hinata could use as a psychological crutch, she's trying to latch onto Haru. She's like a lamprey, grabs on, digs in and sucks the life out of something; a bottom feeder. Haru was wise to rebuff her initial approach.

You know what Haru needs to find? A shotacon. He's never going to go for a girl his physical age since they're too emotionally immature, and most of the women who are of an age with him mentally wouldn't be interested. So either that, or find someone who doesn't care. There was a story (The Ghost of Konoha by Fairystail) that got around this problem neatly by having Naruto be henge'd as someone in their twenties when he interacts with Kurenai, by the time she finds out, she cares for him too much to worry about it (I made it sound really bad. You might want to look it up, it's pretty good and I'm didn't do the description justice).
I'm half joking, but really if you're going to have a pairing at all that's pretty much your only option. Of all the girls his physical age the only one in the Elemental Nations who isn't incredibly irritating and stupid is Kurotsuchi.

Awwww Hinata's so cute here.
Poor thing