Aw...was that Naruto? So cute!

Hm...I wonder what happened...

What if those had been Rasenshuriken? Fire beats wind, it would have made a much bigger explosion but since Naruto will never learn another element his rasengan will always lose to Haru's.

The class - level 5. Naruto & Haru - level 25. Iruka's reaction: DETENTION! Something is wrong here... :-)

When he gets that move perfected it would probably look pretty creepy to a Hyuuga. The Byakugan can see chakra, but can it definitely see it's constituents? Will he look insubstantial or inanimate? Like a ghost or like a zombie?
If nothing else then separating your energies would be a good training technique since you could focus on just the energy you needed to improve, and since it's a harder effort in that state you should improve faster in each given one (seems like chakra is more than the sum of its parts).

It's cause chakra swords are expensive and it makes handguns hard

Great story, one of the best self-inserts I've read in a while.
Although I'm surprised that he lost to Hinata, I suppose it makes sense since her type of fighter is perfect for exploiting all of his weaknesses. But I suppose if Hinata wasn't as far behind at the age of six compared to when she was 12, the results make a lot of sense.

Nice chapter!
A little dramatic but it was good for laughs :D
i'm a little confused though...Haru can trick a Root member and Jounin, how come he couldn't beat a little girl who loses to her little sister? That's really the only thing i got stuck on.
Other then that, awesome chapters!
have a great day and keep up the good work
PepperCornPie

OMG HARU IS A BOY?! lol i thought he was a female when you first described him and was wondering why were you comparing him to boys like sasuke... god im so dense XD Hahas.

Got addicted to this story

This is pretty fantastic! Your prose is good and I'm really enjoying the humor, but most of all I love it when fics get into the details of how their magic system works, and it looks like you're heading in that direction here.

The only real criticism I can think of is that Haru seems too cavalier about his Narutoverse knowledge and the possible consequences of it getting out. Teaching Naruto the rasengan, for example, is an objectively terrible idea that could and probably should have blown right up in his face.

Sweet, fuinjutsu should be interesting. Lol, that ending.

AWESOMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
I really REALLY LOVE YOUR FANFIC n.n
keep writing please ;)

I'm liking it so far, and like most of people in the story I thought Haru was a chick lol but whatever this has been a good read I hope to see more updates in the future

*snicker*