Reviews for Maybe a Dream
Devil Reader chapter 24 . 4/28/2014
Wow! A double update? Thanks for making my day better! It's a really interesting and funny story.
Poppy Grave Dreams chapter 23 . 4/28/2014
Woah, you got a cover.

I was wondering about Sakura. She does seem to be replaced a lot in self-insert fics.

Haru's face is probably going to disarm people.
Paul Perkins chapter 23 . 4/27/2014
Love the new pic, but I am not sure how I feel about this chapter
NoOneInParticular17 chapter 22 . 4/27/2014
This is fuckin' confusing! Is it male or female? Fuckin' pick one and stick to it
WindWhistle21 chapter 23 . 4/27/2014
I really hope Ino has/keeps her crush on Haru. It would be so friggin adorable. XD
Yinko chapter 23 . 4/27/2014
Setting up an Ino pairing? With no Sakura and no Sasuke fan-girlism she's a different enough character for it to work.
Poppy Grave Dreams chapter 22 . 4/26/2014
Woah, what a twist with Naruto's popularity.

Looks like Ino is going to become a more prominent character now. :)
FLaTone chapter 22 . 4/26/2014
This gender confusion thing is getting kinda old. Also what's up with Kurenai picking on 6/7 year olds?
Gir240 chapter 21 . 4/25/2014
You know what would be funny since haru probably was a boy in a past life. What if he subconsciously put a small genjutsu on himself and other that he had boy bits instead of his natural girl bits. This would have to be found out before or during puipirty when things start to grow.
Hannmschvs chapter 21 . 4/25/2014
Poor Haru-chan being forced to a kunoichi class.. does this mean that he'll be the 'kunoichi' of his team? Kufufu..can't wait for that! Please update soon!
Yinko chapter 21 . 4/25/2014
Ah, I'm so conflicted. I love his skills and ideas, but I hate his social interactions.
Paul Perkins chapter 21 . 4/25/2014
This is fun. Kinda odd, but pretty good.
Yinko chapter 6 . 4/25/2014
Helping a canon protagonist, I just became a bit nauseous. Don't you know that they are made stupid so that people can relate to them? To help some one you have to communicate with them, communicate with a stupid.
Yinko chapter 5 . 4/25/2014
Befriending Naruto? Befriending a mentally retarded child with ADHD who relies on the Kyuubi for everything? Wonderful idea. Sarcasm.

Nice genjutsu though.
Yinko chapter 3 . 4/25/2014
Kid should be glad you didn't go all 'face-hugger' on his ass.
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