Reviews for Maybe a Dream
Guest chapter 13 . 4/3/2019
Thank god he wants to change things. I usually just assume they will and then drop it if it rides the rails too hard. Happy to see Haru make the decision up front.
mshenruan chapter 91 . 3/6/2019
WAIT
DID THIS BOY JUST SEAL OBITO INTO HIMSELF!?
redHussar chapter 61 . 2/19/2019
I really hated Haru, but I continued, because some techniques he created were interesting. Sadly, him doing something new is becoming a rare occurence and Haru is behaving like a typical, soft, boring hero. Rare moments, when he isn't nice are random, chaotic and unneccessary.

Sharingan transplantation forced me to quit. This is a soon to be apocaliptic world., Haru has a cheating eye in his hand for half a decade and is refusing to use it because of reasons. Giving it to Sakura, one person he does't like... You know that transplanting stolen Sharingan is surely a high treason? And he is commiting it for feels. It's just... I don't have words for this idiocy.
Ruberforumfree chapter 1 . 2/11/2019
I can't stand the fact that he's not even trying and correct the people calling him a girl, where the fuck is his man pride?
ABZB13 chapter 91 . 2/5/2019
Just finished binging this - I love it!
Guest chapter 91 . 1/19/2019
MORE MORE MORE PLEASE IM BEGGING
Ya0iLover chapter 91 . 1/11/2019
hope you update soon...
Tallow and Port chapter 17 . 1/3/2019
I... don't really like Haru's attitude. but it's an intriguing thought process.
MrKeyFox chapter 91 . 12/18/2018
Wow this story went to shit after chapter 86 huh neat way to beat a dead, guessing we can't hope for a rewrite? Since the author seems quite pleased with this mess they made.
Dude chapter 61 . 11/2/2018
What the hell, sakura getting the sharingan was stupid, she has a small chakra pool, that eye is basically useless in drawn out combat and the ability is wasted cos she wouldn't be able to cast many jutsus if she is also the healer nin, the eyes are more useful to a ninjutsu specialist or chakra pool specialists as they could benefit from the eye greatly while sakura just has 3 negatives to 1 positive, what a waste of a sharingan, the byakugan suits her more, don't expect her to get it but it's more fitting
Dude chapter 51 . 11/2/2018
Woah, well damn, this guy sure ain't no naruto
Dude chapter 44 . 11/2/2018
Why does he talk all negatively with a dark undertone, more people qould trust him if he literally just stopped talking like a villain
Dude chapter 21 . 11/1/2018
Wow it just occurred to me, you potentially just cut haru's talent for taijutsu cos of his stunted growth (i thought everyone already knew that about underage weight training) and his ninjutsu is currently on the shelf for now and maybe for the rest of his life or he might have a smaller chakra pool, so im guessing he's going for a genjutsu, kenjutsu and medical arts build?
Dude chapter 7 . 11/1/2018
Doubt naruto would be able to learn genjutsu, you need a natural talent at chakra control and with naruto's mammoth of a chakra pool, pretty difficult to control that
Emerald Time chapter 91 . 11/1/2018
Haru just can't get a break, can he? I absolutely love this! Thank you for writing and sharing this with us! I hope you can find time to update soon. Good luck on your writing!
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