| Reviews for Maybe a Dream |
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   Episoidal chapter 93 . 8/20/2021 why did you ruin the story with all this nonsense...? |
| Episoidal chapter 33 . 8/20/2021 ? I am so confused why Haru feels obligated to tell six years olds everything. I could criticize him about so many mistakes and blunders he made in his tenure as a resident of the Kishimoto-universe. If I were him, I would have left everyone and everything alone, and moved to a different Shinobi village as soon as I became aware of the existence of fictional existentialism. 'Feeling bad' isn't enough to justify foreknowledge and the misguided belief behind moral superiority in the face of child neglect, abuse, and misinformation. Additionally, the fact that Haru isn't thinking about any consequences and uses emotions to fuel his actions make him a very incompetent SI much less a person with a supposedly 'strong' will. |
| Amun565 chapter 11 . 7/6/2021 The cosplaying as Kenshin here is just eh. |
| Dissapointed chapter 6 . 7/4/2021 It started so well too... yet this will be just another Naruto masturbation fic where OC is nothing but a help for Naruto. |
| Benw8888 chapter 30 . 7/3/2021 I really dont understand why Haru keeps saying things that have no purpose except making it harder for him. Like, he’s immature and just wants to brag about the knowledge he has. |
| Falconfighter1427 chapter 93 . 6/18/2021 Great story |
| Naruto chapter 51 . 6/1/2021 Sakura feels sorry for Tazuna. |
| TheHarshApprentice chapter 30 . 5/2/2021 Why is this story so stupid? Why the fuck did Haru ask that to Hiruzen out of nowhere now huh? Can't he just stay quiet and do his own things. |
| Aremise chapter 9 . 4/19/2021 Part of the plan? TF! Aizen? Is that you? |
| Omnireceptacle chapter 10 . 3/24/2021 HE IS A GUY?! |
| Omnireceptacle chapter 10 . 3/24/2021 Why the fuck is she suddenly telling Inoichi about her dream of finding whoever unleashed the kyuubi? It makes LITERALLY NO SENSE in relation to the conversation, what the actual fuck? |
| Monsieur Mastermind chapter 11 . 3/15/2021 Thought he turned into a khajiit for a sec |
| Zsombi chapter 93 . 2/27/2021 As another reviewer wrote.. rubbish. While there ate a few nice moments and good ideas your execution was atrocious. You advertised (title, summary & tags) a story about a powerful MC that will change the world for better or worse.. but instead you presented a fixit tragedy with illogical ability levels all over the place, most everyone holding an idiot ball or two, and an MC that for all their efforts over nearly 90 chapters doesn't accomplish anything sufficiently important to really change the world. |
| Aire5 chapter 11 . 1/29/2021 n.n really nice fic |
| Karazik chapter 93 . 12/1/2020 Overly dramatic rubbish 3 out of score. Would not recommend. |