Reviews for Maybe a Dream
Guest chapter 28 . 10/27/2020
I hate the mc ,how can u trust someone with a big secret like reincarnation and be desperate for friends .I hate desperate characters
justlovereadin chapter 91 . 10/11/2020
So just all seriousness is gone from this story completely I'm actually really disappointed but I can't say I didn't see it coming
JustDusty chapter 5 . 9/19/2020
can't i just get one fanfiction where MC does not fucking want to save the world? If you wanna do that just leave that shit to naruto. no amoung of training is going to get you anywhere near Naruto's level. And why is it always Konoha?
Blitzstrahl chapter 77 . 9/15/2020
Oh come on! Danzo, and Orochimaru are seriously going to fold Oto and rejoin Konoha?! What about Danzo murdering Itachi?
Haramaki chapter 61 . 9/15/2020
So how is Sakura going to explain to the whole damn clan she has a Sharigan? Let alone the Hokage and village authority...
Nyll-Winter chapter 26 . 9/3/2020
? So despite him training much longer than she has and removing the heavy ass weights he apparently wears all the time, Hinata is still somehow faster than him? Aren't they all like 6? How hard has Kakashi been training if he can graduate the academy at five when the main character (Who has the mental capabilities of a fully grown man) can't handle 6 year old Hinata Hyuuga?

This chapter just feels like one massive fuck up. I didn't expect the main character to be godlike and be capable of whooping chunins at 6 or anything but it's terribly disappointing to know that despite his training and efforts he can still lose to a 6 year old girl who definitely hasn't trained as hard as he has. And he dares to say "I think my Taijutsu is approaching the level of Genin".

Kakashi wouldn't have graduated at five if his strength and speed was the same as the average 5 year old's, regardless of his skill.

Really makes me feel as if all the main character's physical training was useless.
skrapsynneh chapter 9 . 8/26/2020
Hmm, genjutsu capable and some memories of Narutoverse are intact. That leaves me waiting to see how you set up the Transformation technique in this world.
skrapsynneh chapter 7 . 8/26/2020
Makes me try and think back on the actual release date of episodes or manga. Didn't keep up with the series so no idea of what was revealed already by 2014.
skrapsynneh chapter 4 . 8/26/2020
Not usually reading Inserts or OCs, but I like the experimentation with chakra going on. I look forwards to reading the rest.
AxellAcce chapter 93 . 8/7/2020
Wtf just happened in the last two chapters?
RokenDarkly chapter 93 . 7/27/2020
This was an amazing SI fic and I'd definitely recommend it...then chapters 92 and 93 happened...seriously when did this become a crossover and when did he get truth seeking orbs?
RokenDarkly chapter 93 . 7/27/2020
This was an amazing SI fic and I'd definitely recommend it...then chapters 92 and 93 happened...seriously when did this become a crossover and when did he get truth seeking orbs?
Sparkysbro chapter 61 . 7/25/2020
That last scene made me shiver
Sparkysbro chapter 58 . 7/25/2020
That was ENTIRELY UNEXPECTED and I love it!
nathan.vuong.5 chapter 69 . 7/25/2020
Whys haru got to be beat up all the time, cmon that isn't the only way to get character decelopment
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