Reviews for Half Note Whole Love
Guest chapter 5 . 1/18
You would think Bella would be more understanding about coping mechanisms since she hangs out with so many foster kids. Her optimism is beautiful, but she shouldn't expect it from others. Since she keeps talking about how he doesn't know her, you'd expect her to realize it goes both ways
Jaygm chapter 20 . 8/28/2016
What a sweet and very touching story! It is a quick read. It was also very emotional and sad in places. I love where this ends. Thank you.
Jaygm chapter 19 . 8/28/2016
That was okay.
Jaygm chapter 18 . 8/28/2016
I guess his dad wasn't really much of a dad.
Jaygm chapter 17 . 8/28/2016
I think this is actually the first fanfics I have read in which Jacob died and it made my heart break!
Jaygm chapter 16 . 8/28/2016
Now that was really a sweet chapter.
Jaygm chapter 15 . 8/28/2016
Jaygm chapter 14 . 8/28/2016
Typical for kids in a first relationship, right? LOL.
Jaygm chapter 13 . 8/28/2016
That was a very nice surprise.
Jaygm chapter 12 . 8/28/2016
That was really sweet.
Jaygm chapter 11 . 8/28/2016
They are moving along.
Jaygm chapter 10 . 8/28/2016
He's got those walls- that are starting to fall down.
Jaygm chapter 9 . 8/28/2016
Poor Edward. The thought that she might die on him. . .
Jaygm chapter 8 . 8/28/2016
They are all really very supportive of Bella. That's sometimes a difficult place to be. Terminal illness tends to scare people away.
Jaygm chapter 7 . 8/28/2016
What a chapter. You do angst quite well. More tears.
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