Taylor is likely wondering how the fmister Tama is unable to kill a mosquitoe despite oneshotting Lung.

I mean, fighting the Slaughterhouse Nine would probably net him a LOT if cash, so there's that. Just kill them and he's set, ya know.

Pls come back, we love you

I've never read anything about Worm, I only know about that story from fics, so it's not really your fault that I feel like this is an incomprehensible mess.

This fic is good so far, but I'm a little disappointed you left out one of the coolest parts of Saitama's backstory - during his three years of training, Saitaima was also out on the streets fighting monsters and villains and being a hero to several other members of the cast. His unwavering will/shonen energy during those fights to keep getting back up against stronger enemies is a large part of how he became so strong; his method of growth was very similar to Garou's. His hero experience during that time is also a pretty key part of his character: the gag is that even though he's just a hero for fun, he's the most heroic of them all - in both strength AND character. By the time Saitama completed his training and became bald, he was a true hero, the same way when Garou did the same, he became a true monster.

I understand this is a fanfiction and so it's obviously not going to mirror canon perfectly, I think that's a pretty integral part of his character to warrant including.

Ah... not a fan of Taylor being ham-fisted in like that. Hopefully it doesn't turn into one of those fics where the mc follows her around like a lost puppy and solves all her problems for her

Maybe I'm just starved for good OPM fanfic content, but this chapter was great

This is not Saitama lol

Ah yes everybody sing thrist shop store by MACKLEMORE & RYAN LEWIS..

I've reread this fanfic so many times, and it still gold. Thank you!

Rather than "heem'ing and haa'ing," the phrase is hemming and hawing.

Saitama's personality was arguably the best part of OPM and you just go and butcher it. This guy acts nothing like Saitama other than denying that his powers are special.

*HONORABLE* WWII Nazi soldiers? ...Man, I don't know what you're smoking, but I want some too. XD

*Sigh*

Seriously, this guy you're writing about? He had like one episode in the anime, while in the rest of the story we got the actual Saitama everyone knows and loves. I want THAT Saitama, not this Lite version. I wish you got him started training a year or two more than you did.

oni lee is like speed of sound sanic. only more annoying. thankfully saitama accidentally punched his jewel. he's not as tough as sanic who can still back talk saitama and walk away after the same accident.