|Reviews for The Art of Deception: Shadow Manipulator|
| Spidersauce chapter 1 . 6/27
Plans to show far too much weakness IMO. Don't go all out, but don't paint yourself as pathetic.
| Nortia2 chapter 19 . 2/11
So sad to see this still on hiatus. I wish you would write only 2-3 chapters as a wrap up, if only for the readers and for the effort you surely put on the story when you first started it. You could even write a chapter many years in the future saying this and this happened, and then be done with it if you never really want to write again this story in any serious manner. I hope you consider it
| Eagle-Eyes chapter 19 . 12/4/2017
Cliff hangar and no update in years...
Oh well, great story
| Highlander83 chapter 19 . 7/23/2017
I just finished reading what you have started for this fic, I have to say your making the story into something amazing. My favorite fics are with Harry daph and Tracey as a couple. Keep up with this story
| LetsSeeIfICanDoThisToo chapter 18 . 6/3/2017
Hmmm harry and the alley scene was pointless and did not fit in. Now this and theres only 1 chapter left. Id rather stop here before i fond out that thw nwxt chapter destroys the story further.
That said the story has been great, i just stopped liking things since summer break. Your writing style, pacing and dialog however are impecable, you got quite the talent. The plot was nice sinister and dark with 2 people crawling out of their shells to a better tomorrow.
I understand the escalation and rythm you build into your story, however its a very fine balance between making it too little and too much. For my tastes it became too much, in too short a time, but that might be because i am more fragile than most. You tend to balance the story on the edge of the tip of a knife, and do so well, there are few writers who are as daring, and i highly recommend you to keep writing.
| Phillies2 chapter 18 . 5/7/2017
It's unfortunate this is on Hiatus. I enjoyed everything so far and think a lot of people came down hard for grammar on you, you only had a couple mistakes where you needed another word or such. i hope you do continue so I can find out if Harry somehow can unlock Daphnes memories
| Phillies2 chapter 9 . 5/6/2017
Honestly, just kill Mr. Greengrass, I mean Daphne almost killed herself so I think she could do it
| Inchquin chapter 4 . 2/18/2017
I assume it is içe queen
| Rhino109 chapter 1 . 2/7/2017
Your grammar is painful.
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/24/2016
Your English grammar is pretty bad.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/17/2016
Too fast. Slow down
| Vi38 chapter 19 . 6/11/2016
I miss this Story
| King of the Souls chapter 10 . 4/5/2016
This is a good story however, you frequently say he/she suicide when it should be he/she committed suicide. In one chapter Harry said I almost suicide and again you don't suicide you commit suicide.
| Tsamoka chapter 19 . 10/2/2015
How's Harry going to get the two of them out of this one? I can't wait to find out! :)
| Bob-Just-Bob chapter 6 . 9/20/2015
she is stupid, this is stupid