Really try reading through this story. But I can’t. Just full of cringe shit

In my opinion you made jinchuurikis way too weak.
They are supposed to be the ultimate weapons of their village, a mere genin should have absolutely no chance to defeat one of them, no matter the circumstances. Frankly right now, I really don't see what the big deal is about jinchuuriki and I don't see why they would be feared at all, they don't seem to be particulary more powerful than your average genin, the lowest of the low when it comes to shinobi ranking and that's a problem.

Great story so far please continue

Looking forward to Chapter 24.

You can’t have naruto go through all this and expect him to have even a speck of loyalty left for konoha, your only option to go from here that wouldn’t make naruto a total retard is if he plans on escaping konoha or seeks revenge against it beacuse staying in this vilage and continuously taking this torture is just not something a Dane person would do

Continue, please, with the story it's very good, don't give up, please, a story that the truth has no comparison. I can tell you since I am a big fan of this type of stories and the truth is that they have no comparison.

Hum...I think you made a mistake, when Naruto's deprived Sasuke of oxygène, the moment thé clone vanished it doesn't give damages back, just memories so no need to heal.

I feel like this Naruto has a constant disappointed look on his face

Best part is, since Naruto never got a kekkei genkai, and it it unknown if that crow Itachi shoved down Naruto's throat is a summon we truly have no idea if a summon could gain a kekkei genkai if it is a familiar/personal summon like Gamakichi was to Naruto

why was Hiruzen wondering who trained Naruto when Mihawk told him and Mikoto that he was taking Naruto to teach him?

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I enjoyed reading the story a lot and I wish to thank you for writing it. It was awesome to read. Keep up the amazing work.

so you hype naruto up and have him train for 6 years and he nearly loses against one of the weakest swordsmen of the most

This story fucking contradicts itself so many times I mean first of all naruto is supposed to be smart and cold but he’s literally making the same choices he made in cannon then you say that he’s low jounin but you have him somehow struggle with little fucking genins then you seem to forget/not care that the hidden leaf has a fucking law that no one is to speak of the naruto being a jinchurki yet everyone and their mother calls him a demon brat even in front of his father, the fucking HOKAGE, and all they get is a fucking warning are you serious?! Fuck that bro might as well watch cannon naruto since you basically made naruto exactly the same except with a little bit of family drama…

Continue please it's really good