|Reviews for Descent Into Darkness|
| SunnyJ chapter 21 . 5/18
Absolutely LOVED this story! I really hope you're still considering a sequel! I sure hope so!
| HaruxRan chapter 21 . 4/30
Weak ending and as the story drew on it got...well, it went from good to bad. It was alright up until Hinata was made immortal. You should have just ended it there because the way you ended this was completely and utterly WEAK as f*ck.
I like the Hidan/Hinata pairings, I always have, but you just lacked the ability and talent to make it something special.
| Sonzai Suru chapter 21 . 4/26
im in love with your story! please a sequel :)
| Random Reader chapter 10 . 4/10
I like your story so far, and I enjoy your writing style, but I just hate it when female characters give up their morals because of the sexual tension they feel toward the male lead. She literally just watched him torture, kill, and sacrifice a man and then rape her, but she still feels like making out with him afterwards. There was not much else she could do in that situation, but she shouldn't have kissed him back and groped him. It was as if she forgot about how sick he was because he showed her a little affection...I know Hinata hadn't received much affection in her life, so she may have been starving for it, but she's smart, has high morals, and is very loyal to her home, friends and family. Hidan and his group want to kill her home, friends and family. It just seems like rather than falling in love with him, she should be analyzing different things about Hidan and his friends to help her people... I'm sorry, I don't mean to go off on your story, because I like your ideas and your writing, its just a pet peeve of mine when the when's gets with the guy right after he does something horrible to her, or gets with a guy knowing he's recently done something horrible...I really want to see how the story progresses as I'm only on chapter 10, but i just wanted to give my input thus far...Thank you for your story and having the dedication to share it with all us readers :)
| 4thkage chapter 8 . 4/11
i think i'd read this fanfic before...
but why it didn't in my favorite lists...
TOBI was so funny and hilarious...
| Hinata-Hime-Starz chapter 21 . 3/17
Soooooo are you still going to make a sequel?
| Komorebi-chan chapter 21 . 1/20
You just made this crack pairing so adorable that I don't regret clicking on Hidan for lolz Your writing is so nice and I know I'm a pretty late reviewer, but I would love to read a sequel!
| missvietlove chapter 21 . 12/20/2014
It was amazing! Really I have never thought that Hinata and Hidan could be together, and you have change my mind, they are so cute, yet so hot, my god I have cry and laugh throughout all my reading. I can't stop myself from reading and because of that I have went to bed at , never do this before so thank you for this story, it was a revelation!
| Azrayahx chapter 1 . 12/15/2014
Absolutely loved this story thank you for writing
| witchprincess33 chapter 21 . 10/16/2014
That. Was so. AMAZING! Holy crap I'm sad it's over! I think I might actually cry. Yup I'm crying. TT lol you did great on this fic. I wasn't able to stop reading once!
| RinneLin chapter 21 . 8/19/2014
You did an excellent job with an unusual pairing. And I loved it! And if I really think about it, if I was on Hinata's place I would probably do the same thing. Choose to stay rather than go back to Konoha where I would be treated as insignificant again.
| SoraTengu38 chapter 21 . 7/5/2014
Please write a sequel!
| blackirishawk chapter 21 . 7/4/2014
Oh this story left so many possibilities but it closed so well I applaud thee lol this was amazing
| blackirishawk chapter 12 . 7/4/2014
Let me pause and say I'm so glad you didn't make her into a sadistic killer she's still him at a with more confidence and control I thank you for that and on that note to the next chapter
| IamEnVIOUS chapter 21 . 7/2/2014
Sequel god damn it!