Reviews for A Clef and Umi Love Story
DeliciousAmbiguity chapter 22 . 12/10/2003
*Twitch...* Ferio, Umi, and Clef are going to New York...anyways, continue soon!
Lila Paige Rose chapter 22 . 10/24/2003
This is the greatest ever! I totally love it! Please continue, and I suggest that clef run into Umi.I just want to raise a question: why did Umi shout HENTAI! at Clef when they were inthe bed? How were they supposed to produce Yuke, to kiss?
lilybunny who is too lazy to sign in chapter 3 . 10/18/2003
I wish I could write this story too. It's a great idea but you really should concentrate on plot development. Everything just happens so quickly!
MoonPaper chapter 22 . 10/15/2003
Please, do continue!

I like it very much, though you *can* fix your grammar, spelling and the paragraphing and... well, yeh. But overall, I really do like it.
bleu comme l'hiver chapter 22 . 10/12/2003
Ohh! Nice! Update soon!
Lanrete chapter 22 . 10/10/2003
nice! i want them to meet! another clami moment! pls! so sweet. Yuki sounds so perfect for Umi's daughter's name. I know how it is like to have lots of hmwk! n u used to update everyday *amazing...*

write more! Ja Ne!
hyperitaliangurl chapter 22 . 10/9/2003
i lov this story so much plezz ryte move i luv umi/celf
Umi-chan3 chapter 21 . 9/29/2003
It's good to see you back. I know all about the homework deal, I've had a ton of it myself. I really should be writing instead of reading your fic, but it was so cute. I love the young romance! It's simply adorable! Update soon ;)
Aranami-koi chapter 20 . 9/23/2003
WOW great fic so far! Please update soon!
Umi-chan chapter 21 . 9/23/2003
2 weeks? It's been almost a year! Wha this is such a kawaii fic please update!
yoshimi chapter 21 . 9/19/2003
could u please hurry up and update!
Misanagi-Anna chapter 1 . 9/19/2003
Hey! I like your story! it's cool! love it! but try to be more detailed, k? it'll be much betta like that... i hope you dun mind... but my story is kinda like yours... hehe... sorry bout that..
celes8 chapter 20 . 8/5/2003
PLEASE, please, please continue! o
Mimi chapter 20 . 5/4/2003
Continue your good story!
jane chapter 20 . 4/17/2003
hey! i like ur story!

actually i read it awhile back. it has been a long time since i was able to check if the next chap. up. but i'm a little confused about who's who. about sutake, yuki and yuhi. who's the girl?the boy?the matchmaker?and who's the daughter of umi? Fuu? and hikaru?i'm really confused! sorry!

but great job though...D

Jane
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