Reviews for In Fire Forged |
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thebibliophilerises chapter 8 . 9/20/2019 I adore political fics and fics with supplementary in-universe primary source material and gender swap fics so this is like, my jam. And your Sakura is incredibly interesting, with a really unique set of competencies— i LOVE that she’s so good at fuinjutsu and at strategy, and that that gives her a really solid role in Team Seven. I also love how you had the chuunin and jounin senseis; it never made sense to me that a whole year’s graduating class could only be 9-12 kids. Anyways, I really love this fic! It seems dead, so imma be honest, I’m a little sad about that (especially since we’ll never learn how Sakura beats Izanami!) but I wanted to let you know that your story is awesome, and I’ll be following it just in case! |
respectjounin chapter 3 . 8/25/2019 I really really love the story so far. And I especially enjoy how detailed it is and the depth of her relationships and perceptions. Like I LOVE the detail! A lot of other stories have great characters and great plot, but skip over the many processes they deem unnecessary with a few passing descriptions but the imagery I get for these scenes are great! And I like the oc as Sakura because it seems just like her but slightly different and I like it. I hope this story gets finished because it really is a gem so far!(: |
Aurora chapter 8 . 7/6/2019 I'm in love with this story, it's such a shame it isn't finished. Are you ever going to update it? Lots of love ️ |
ward201 chapter 8 . 3/3/2019 Love |
Guest chapter 2 . 2/23/2019 You did this in a way that Sakura may actually fit in with team 7, nice. |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/23/2019 I dont remember there being 2 sannin. If i was sakura i would realize this soon enough, and then I would sit the f*ck down and laugh as both of them are beat backwards to sunday because i would take a chuunin leader and teammates i can work with over team 7. But im not this sakura so whatever. |
himalay.senapati chapter 2 . 2/19/2019 coool story |
ays102 chapter 8 . 12/13/2018 This is interesting. I hope you continue it soon! |
TheChairIsAgainstTheWall chapter 8 . 11/26/2018 Aww… don't be dead, I love this! The worldbuildingn is excellent, and I don't believe I've ever seen a Fem-Sasuke story before. Don't be dead, don't be dead… |
Unidentified chapter 8 . 5/2/2018 Well, I liked this a lot. I do hope you post the next part you have written - it may be easier to get back to that way. I'll go check the blog now. Cheers. - Horatio Von Becker |
Unidentified chapter 7 . 5/2/2018 Entertainingly creepy, but why use this instead of the Transformation technique? Also, why shuffle faces at a different rate than he shuffles bodies? It seems like a fairly fallible disguise, which seems odd for a custom technique of Orochimaru. Also, like it would require the power to change his skull fairly easily, so about half of the utility would be achieved from just making a good lifelike mask. Hmm. |
Unidentified chapter 6 . 5/2/2018 Something weird is going on. Something very weird. Also, with this context, I wonder if Sakura's 'drunk' episode is actually cover for a Sharingan-based technique implantation. Some way to use her as a spy and/or weapon. I really want to see where this goes! |
Unidentified chapter 5 . 5/2/2018 So. Who drugged her, and was there anything to it beyond stealing her notes? I wonder... |
Unidentified chapter 4 . 4/26/2018 Again, mostly just characterization here, but it's really /good/ characterization so I like it a lot. Think you. |
Unidentified chapter 3 . 4/24/2018 That was delightful. I really like both the chakra nerdery and the Sakura/Ino dynamic. It's a lot of fun. |