Reviews for In Fire Forged
sensoray chapter 8 . 6/15/2017
I must say, Im very happy I stumbled across this gem. I really enjoy your writing style and I can't wait till you pick it up again. I like the changes that you made to cannon and the characters stay in character perfectly. Love it
Guest chapter 8 . 6/14/2017
This was a pretty interesting read, I liked how you changed the sasuke-naruto relationship to make it so that it wouldn'tbe creepy for them to flirt etc.
Changing Sakura a lot was also a decision that I liked, I tend to enjoy fanfic with a different from normal Sakura in a big part because she is positioned in a situation to observe/interact with the main characters and story while not having, in the canon, such an incredibly interesting personality/character dynamics of her own.
Kakashi feels a lot more ambiguous than in the original, much more credible when he pulls shit at the beginning and that's also a big improvement.
The more "realistic" worldbulding was Ok in parts but not all that great in others.
What I didn't like about it:
-long essays at the end got boring. Rationalized magic is nice but there was a lot of description of things that a reader would have expected anyway, and few partuclarly innovative/interestimg thimgs. Shorter would have been better.
-the "contemporary" ambientation clashes a lot with what remains of the original setting. Yes, I get that this is intentional, but there is quite a distance between the middle ages and 1946, an intermediate period would have worked a lot better if you wanted to portray a more rational/scientific/mundane/cynic period.
-the introduction of Sakura's "modern" family, with a stay-home father, felt somewhat preachy
More realism in the Kage's interactions was nice though.
In general, the character interactions were good: fun, different, and realistic-feeling.
The fight scene with Kakashi was OK. Again more for the interactions that the action itself (that was decent though)
I understand that you will probably never continue this, but some feedback is always useful, no? I hope you keep writing, this was a fun read.
QuestionsForSome chapter 1 . 5/23/2017
Would it be fair to assume there's no plans for an update?
Guest chapter 4 . 4/15/2017
Huh, I wonder how Sakura plans on beating Izanami...and I just don't see it happening, assuming that Izanami is female!Sasuke. Sakura is talented in her own right, but she isn't a genius like Izanami/Sasuke or a powerhouse like Naruto. I feel like she'd have something of a chance if her strategy is really that great. But then again, she doesn't know Izanami/Sasuke's full skillset yet AND Izanami/Sasuke is arguably even better at strategy than her, so...
Yeah, just can't see her winning. It'd still be interesting to see their confrontation unfold though.
Guest chapter 3 . 4/15/2017
This is pretty interesting, although I wonder why Sakura is so different from canon. And what's her problem with Izanami? Is it just petty schoolgirl jealousy or something more? How did Naruto and Izanami become friends in the first place?
Well, I guess I'll find out. I have high hopes for this fanfic, but I'm a bit tentative due to some OOCness. Reserving my judgement until I finish this.
InsaneIsBestSane chapter 8 . 2/14/2017
Love the chapter, just got into it, really enjoy it!
Reader chapter 1 . 12/27/2016
Well shoot Sakura, aren't you just screwed?
k123 chapter 8 . 12/24/2016
This is such an interesting world! I like that you've aged them all up a bit, and the bits at the beginning and ends of the chapter talking about how chakra works and the history of the world are fascinating.

Sakura is amazing, Izanami has hidden depths I'm sure, Naruto is Naruto, and Kakashi is somehow actually a capable teacher?

I really like your Sakura - you've written her as smart and hardworking, but not super overpowered or perfect. Also, her friendship with Ino gives me life.

Plus we're getting into the political situation which is sure to be fascinating!
Hello chapter 8 . 12/1/2016
The fact that you haven't updated recently is quite depressing, considering that this is a marvelous story. Hope to see some activity soon.
i30817 chapter 8 . 11/17/2016
Nice deconstruction bro. You've proven to be more ambitious about storytelling than 98% of Naruto fanfic writers with all of this semi-realistic worldbuilding and canon-rail teasing. I actually keep expecting Gatō to appear as slightly smarter 'Gotama' bigwig that doesn't commit suicide by ninja by being hilariously stupid just to make it obvious.
adelheidedavis chapter 2 . 7/12/2016
GODDAMN THAT UCHIHA IS SUCH A PRICK! BUT NARUTO IS SO KIND AND PRECIOUS GO NARUTO
Anonymous chapter 2 . 5/28/2016
This is probably abandoned, but this is still one of my favorite Sakura fics ever.
Guest chapter 8 . 5/2/2016
Really love your world building and integration of realistic physics. Looking forward to more
Teal Thanatos chapter 8 . 4/10/2016
I enjoyed reading this.
I'm not sure how often I will wander back and check for new chapters.
the politics in this seem bearable and not over the top with their own smugness at how clever the author is, which is nice.
the Bluegayle chapter 1 . 2/27/2016
Thank you
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