Reviews for Little Progeny
nantono chapter 2 . 10/5
nice story
nantono chapter 1 . 10/5
BhaellaRose chapter 2 . 6/23
Aww I wish there was more to this. Great what I read this far.
cardmaster11 chapter 2 . 11/6/2020
This is awesome please continue!
7 of 13 chapter 2 . 9/22/2020
I don't usually follow a story less than 40,00 words, but I'm instantly interested in this one.
Dark-Prince-of-Clowns chapter 2 . 4/27/2020
I hope you keep writing. _

That said, I suggest you tone down on the burping.
Yes, he does it, but not every second sentence. Even the show toned it down after the first episode.
While it adds character, it DO get annoying when it's overdone.

It's like writing a character with an accent; The common rules is to add just enough to give the readers the basic idea, but avoid overdoing it. Doing it less in writing than it would be in real life was actually suggested by my writing course.

Still... I would LOVE to see what kind of sociopath Harry grows up to be. Especially if he stuffs him in the same 'babysitter-world' as he did Beth. xD
fay chapter 2 . 1/6/2020
love this story, sorry I forgot my login.
4597boss chapter 2 . 1/3/2020
Lady Kaiki chapter 2 . 10/5/2019
Awesome ! Plz, update soon !
ProngsPotter22 chapter 2 . 2/22/2019
Please, please continue! I can't wait to see what a Harry raised by Rick will be like! :)
Loveless Demon chapter 2 . 3/18/2018
*Claps slowly,tears in my eyes* amazing.
Bomberguy789 chapter 2 . 3/4/2018
Eh, it's probably safe to say that you aren't going to be updating this, but it was cool to read the two chapters you did make. Oh well.
Skull Flame chapter 2 . 2/1/2018
Man, I wonder what opinion Rick has of Hogwart's staff, and what Hogwart's staff think of him...
00esoteric00 chapter 2 . 12/30/2017
Please, please, please, please write note if this!
Satnapillowpants chapter 2 . 12/26/2017
Can’t wait for more!
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