Reviews for The Wheel
Living in Time chapter 28 . 7/10/2004
~KP
Living in Time chapter 27 . 7/10/2004
Whoa. That's chilling.

~KP
Living in Time chapter 26 . 7/10/2004
AH! Rachel!

~KP
Living in Time chapter 25 . 7/10/2004
Good! Good! Good!

~KP
Living in Time chapter 24 . 7/10/2004
Tobias' comment hit the nail on the head.

Clffie. 'Nuff said.

~KP
Living in Time chapter 23 . 7/10/2004
Wow, Cassie sounds scary. And it's another cliffie, so quick review.

~KP
Living in Time chapter 22 . 7/10/2004
King Kong. Gorilla. Marco.

I actually didn't know that until I read the next few chappies, but I'll pretend I did.

~KP
Living in Time chapter 21 . 7/10/2004
No, I want to know what happened to Cassie!

Patience. It take two clicks.

*goes to next chapter*

~KP
Living in Time chapter 20 . 7/10/2004
That is a very good question. I know what, because I read this before. But still, if I hadn't then I would again leave a very short review because I would want to know why.

With that in mind...

~KP
Living in Time chapter 19 . 7/10/2004
I loved the conversation between the girls. I hear that everyday in school.

~KP
Living in Time chapter 18 . 7/10/2004
Marco's paranoia is starting to scare me.

And that was a neat addition with Linda being beheaded in the French Revolution. *shivers* Nasty time period. Like most of Earth's history.

~KP
Living in Time chapter 17 . 7/10/2004
Ouch. That's a lot of Controllers.

I'm going back to leaving short reviews because I want to get on with the fic.

~KP
Living in Time chapter 16 . 7/10/2004
I thought Erek didn't go to their school. Does he? I can't remember.

So Cassie came back. The five minutes Marco was describing were pretty tense. Personally, I think that was the stupidest thing he could have done, for his peace of mind. Oh well. Everything is better now.

~KP
Living in Time chapter 15 . 7/10/2004
That's pretty risky. I'm sure Cassie would appreciate the privacy, but if she is a Controller...

I really should have reviewed the first time. I'm trying to review as if it were my first time, but it's not.

I hope that made sense.

~KP
Living in Time chapter 14 . 7/10/2004
That was sweet. I really like the way you portray Marco with his Dad. This chapter reminded me a lot of exactly what the Animorphs go through to hide their fighting from their parents.

~KP
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