|Reviews for What Doesn't Kill You|
| Fifie chapter 1 . 58m
Why are you doing this to me, this was so great, there is a beautiful opportunity to do a time skip here and make her come back when she's older, stronger, I'm not forgetting you this was awesome I want more
| DoubleBeast chapter 33 . 5/21
- I wanted to see Aoi tell Kakashi something like " I left all the information that was stored in the Oracle back in Konoha"
- I don't think Aoi was prepared for Hiruzen's heavy injury and thus Danzo and root possibly finding her extensive notes instead of the Shikaku and the others. Will it be alright? Will there be an opportunity for Shikaku (or Kakashi or anyone not Danzo/root) to say "Detailed profiles of a large number of high class shinobi along with a substantial amount of what is presumed to be relevant information, all in an unknown code, has been posted in the civilian section ... Anonymously " ?
-Too bad about Shino, he's dead, unless you send some medic/ANBUmedic his way soon after Shin left. (which is unlikely)
- I want Hinata to tell someone (preferably Neji, even if they aren't on good terms yet) that Aoi knew that grass nin was Orochimaru/dangerous from the 1st exam. (granted, Shino-related angst will probably take precedence time-wise over looking back on Aoi's behavipur, but still)
I like the idea of the wards btw
| MINTERRIA chapter 33 . 5/15
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH.
| ope-hana chapter 33 . 5/9
diablos! que cambio de trama!
definitivamente me atrajo mas este que las otras de sunshine y CYB
please. me dejaste con la intriga en que sucederá mas adelante.
te espero con mucho anhelo :)
| Guest chapter 33 . 5/6
Ha! I cannot believe Orochimaru didn't study the chackra either. I also feel bad for Aoi and her interactions with the cannon characters. I mean, sure, she was a coward and at times mean with some of them but really, every other person in her place would probably have done the same or at least similar. No one wants to really interact with Naruto unless they have a solid plan and are cnfident in their survival skills...I now want to see all the Rookies grovelling/rumiating about their behaviours against Aoi. I dunno if Shino died but in the end Aoi ended up saving everyone's asses. And she has already payed the prize...I wonder if she will eventually heal the burning in her face or leave it like that. Also, what happened withthe Wave mission? Did everything go like cannon? And what will Aoi do now that she's on the run? Only possibilities are to stay in the Fire Nation hiding in little villages or try her luck in other Nations until things in Konoha get solved somehow. Maybe try her luck at Kumo and help Karin? Although that one is also a RED flag due to Karin being another objective of Orochimaru...in amy case, I loved this work and I cannot wait to seehow will Aoi fare.
| homelybiscuit chapter 33 . 4/29
I'm absolutely in love with this story, I hope you're still writing it and if so I really can't wait to read what comes next!
| AWhimsicalLaugh chapter 33 . 4/26
Man I love this story so much! Thanks for sharing!
| TedTangerines chapter 33 . 4/20
This was a blast to read. It took me a few days but I was hooked from start to finish. Thank you for the story. You have me many hours of entertainment and I appreciate it
| darklight66 chapter 33 . 4/16
ok i love this story aoi beeing one of my favorate si's i hope you come back to this story one day
| MidnightRausse chapter 33 . 4/13
Please continue. This fic is getting better.
| Guest chapter 33 . 4/6
Did Shino really died? I hope not :( :( :(
| Anon chapter 33 . 3/29
I know this story is likely dead, but I do hope to see more of it some day. The Chuunin Exam arc is my favourite and I'm so interested in seeing what happens with the invasion, with Orochimaru and Danzo.
| Smiling Seshat chapter 28 . 3/29
For a singular noun ending with S and you wanting to add 's at the end, it goes like that:
Cerys likes taking long walks.
And then it becomes:
Cerys' passion is to take long walks.
So the apostrophe is added, but you can't have two S so the S of 's is deleted.
| GR chapter 33 . 3/28
I hope they tell the Gemini the reason why she "betrayed" them. Otherwise that would be f*ed up.
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/23
I’m not sure why every self insert I read makes the character a person who wants nothing to do with ninjas and changing things and not helping and seem to only want to make sure they don’t die. This girl is behaving like a sociopath so far