Reviews for What Doesn't Kill You |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Z, I know this fic is on infinite hiatus, but I just want you to know that I think about this fic daily. I loved and still love the character of A and love putting her in my little internal stories sometimes. If you ever continue, which is highly unlikely I know, I’d love to know more about her relationship with her genin teammates and how they feel about her, they’ve known each other all they’re lives so even if they want to deny it, they are important to each other. That’s all, thank you for the fic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am excited for the next chapter! Keep up the good work - ️ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I guess technically you kept the promise, the next chapter can't end on a cliffhanger if it's never posted... Amazing story, one of the best Naruto fanfics out there |
![]() ![]() ![]() I expected the client to be orochi ngl |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is the first time her death has been mentioned. it goes from not remembering her death to having undisclosed nightmares of it with no explanation? |
![]() ![]() ![]() 'little package' makes it sound like orochimaru cut off his own dick and left it for Hiruzen :sob: |
![]() ![]() ![]() NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! WHY DID YOU HAVE TO END THIS ON A CLIFFHANGER! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Danzig sure is a bitch ass mothafucka |
![]() ![]() ![]() That mission report was hilarious. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I honestly enjoyed both the scientific and philosophical aspects of this chapter. I like how Aoi is aware of the fact that things aren’t just as simple as saving everyone. Like saving Hiruzen might seem like a good idea until you realize that it means that Tsunade will never come into play. Or stopping the Hidden Sand invasion might save some people but in the long run it might mean that Gaara might never be redeemed which would have a lot of awful rebound effects. Like the hidden sand not getting an actually competent kazekage in the future or the hidden leaf not gaining a strong and reliable ally. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() Who is it gonna be… |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another W for Hana |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really feel bad for Hinata, she’s blatantly being taken advantage of in this one sided relationship. I get that Aoi wants to stay away from messing with the timeline but it’s already too late for that, there’s no reason for her to manipulate Hinata like that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like how you characterized Kakashi, good job. |