I'm lovin' the fast updates! I find it reasonable that Aoi's having trouble with the suffix thing and I can't wait for her aversion to them to get her stuck in an unpleasant situation. Mahaha! I can only hope...

Oh! OROCHIMARU'S KID?! Absolutley brilliant. I should of seen that coming what with the yellow eyes, but I really didn't. I was pleasantly surprised though (after freaking out a bit) that now she's got a reason to get involved with the plot.

I like that Aoi is incredibly smart or at the very least can think on her feet. Self-preservation is the best motivation ;)

This is really interesting, and I like it!

Woohoo, an update! And so soon!

Aww, Nana died.

Ooh, Orochimaru is coming in. I feel like there must be some sort of connection between him and Aoi. Must be the yellow eyes thing, or something.

Really good so far. I really like reading this fanfic.

*Snort* I'm definitely interested in the direction this fic is heading. I remember being incredibly annoyed the first time I read a fic where the OC avoided getting involved with Naruto/plot. It just seemed illogical to me, what with the whole 'I'm in the Narutoverse, I can change so much!' approach common to most fanfiction. On the other hand, your fic (or maybe it's just your writing style) has made me willing to get over my prejudice.

I like that the OC is different. I like that her interest in medicine doesn't come across as random or Sue-ish. I like her attitude. I like that you can actually describe a fight scene without sounding droll or disjointed; your use of imagery makes it feel like I'm fighting alongside Kakashi. Overall, I like what you're doing. So please keep doing it :)

-SoulOfSolitude

Another great chapter :)

This is pretty awesome. Love how you didn't make Aoi try to befriend and help Naruto, that seems more natural then the oc's that try to help him and want to be ninja's right away. Thanks for the amazing story, update soon please

I really like the beginning of this, I hope to read more.

Yes! I think you should continue! That was a great beginning. I like the mother's point of view; usually in these types of stories it's from the OC or SI's, and the true...creepiness of their baby-acting is lost.

A very, very nice start. You passed the time quickly enough that we weren't bored to tears with all of the details, but slowly enough not to be considered rushed.

I do have one question, though. It seemed as though (Aoi, right?) was able to understand her mother when she was describing the Hokage Monument, and when Kurenai was talking about the headband. (Oh, that was one more thing; was it Kurenai talking about the headband or her mother again? I wasn't entirely sure...)
The thing is, it seemed to be a while after that incident that Aoi obtained a firm grasp of the new language. Or maybe she understood it all along and just wanted to be able to speak English properly before trying any Japanese?

Just a couple of questions, I'm not trying to discourage you! But it always helps me when my readers point out little things that confuse them, and I'd only like to do the same. :)

I enjoyed this a lot - wish there was more to read already! And I like the cliffhanger at the ending. It was a nice stopping point and you left yourself with a lot of options. :)

Glad to have checked this out. Thanks for writing! Until next time, then?

Sincerely yours,

Mein Benutzername.

(P.S. - I have read/am reading all of those lovely fics mentioned in your Author's notes...they're all brilliant, aren't they? I can practically see the potential for your story to reach the same caliber of entertainment and plain good writing as those three - some of my all-time favorites. Can't wait to see what's next! :D)

Please continue! I love that for once somebody notices the SI isn't a normal baby! It's a great idea!

This was excellent, very well written. I can't wait for more :)

Hell yeah you should continue it! I'm looking forward to more updates; that cliff hanger was just PURE evil! Wow, I like the POV. It's different. After spending an ungodly amount of time reading fanfics, different is good. You've got me hooked.

yes you should definitely continue! It's a really interesting start and the different point of view really caught my attention, so... in other words YES!

Not bad. Typo here or there.