Reviews for Devil Arts Online
Zepolmoon chapter 16 . 4/4
Great sacred gears for Argo’s Peerage, will Suguha/Leafa be in her peerage as well or did the group just manipulate her memories?
Zepolmoon chapter 15 . 4/4
Great fights this chapter also love how PoH’s new team got away for now. Hope to see them show up again as a full Peerage just to get beaten down by Argo’s and Rias’ Peerage. Simon having a sacred gear is also a plus, hopefully best girl stays relevant to this story. I also want to say that a human swaying a devil to be a true devil to be amusing
jabujabu63 chapter 26 . 3/14
Ch26 Kirito has been blessed on completing aincrad so he is effectively the Champion/Avatar of the Interwebs by Heathcliff who had ascended as the first God of the internet and also all Frontliners were blessed so they can replicate their characters abilities upon gaining access to any mystical energy if they consciously attempt the ability in question
Guest chapter 5 . 3/13
His name is Riser, not Raiser.

Please get yourself a betareader, you need one.
Guest chapter 3 . 3/13
Please stop using brackets like this: [Rook]
It breaks the reading flow and takes me out of the story.

And please get yourself an editor, aside from grammar mistakes your writing is fairly rough around the edges, and could use a second pair of eyes.
Aedwards179 chapter 5 . 2/26
issei already high devil level this early? author really wants to boost everyone but kirito and asuna huh
Aedwards179 chapter 4 . 2/26
Nah Kirito should 100% be better than kiba. kiba might have been training longer but kirito has been living in life and desth situations for almost 2 years straight.
Aedwards179 chapter 1 . 2/26
rias should have more than 2 pieces left. Akeno is the queen, kiba a knight, asia a bishop, koneko a rook and issei 8 pawns. shes still got a bishop, knight and rook. and i feel like kirito should be worth like 6-7 pieces
Zepolmoon chapter 5 . 2/23
STARBURST STREAM! Can’t wait to see Kirito use that on Raiser, hopefully he spams that skill into oblivion. Rais has this game in the bag, so long as they can stall the game long enough for Issei to power up a lot, there is no way for them to lose
Zepolmoon chapter 1 . 2/23
Can’t wait for the Beater to break the meta of devil society, wonder will he get new swords or will he get a very limited Sword Birth to only summon swords he used in SAO and ALO, or will he gain a new magic centered around swords like Emiya’s (FSN).
tarrangar chapter 2 . 5/5/2023
Devils can't just grant wishes like that though, the wishes they grant is achieved though their power and knowledge, so unless Kirito has already learned magical hacking, he would need to manually hack ALO, to allow Mil-Tan to play as a girl.

Of course it's fully possible Kirito could do that, especially since he can ask Yui for help.
tarrangar chapter 1 . 5/5/2023
I really doubt that Rias would accept only that one payment, the app is more likely advisory than a hard thing they have to follow, but of course, if Rias do want him in her Peerage, and he's ready to join to heal Asuna, then there's no need to settle on an alternate price, but considering healing is rather easy for Asia, Rias should have thought that she could just set her own price, if the app mentioned an unacceptable price.

Of course Rias wouldn't do that for every task, but when the task is something like healing, and the price is set that high, I expect it would be one of the cases where she would decide to adjust the price, if Kirito looked like he really didn't want to do this, because Rias don't particularly want a Peerage member who don't want to be there.

Same if the app told her the appropriate price was his soul, that's illegal and not something Rias want to do at all, so if the app for some reason said that, she would probably just set her own alternate price.
spartenpride11 chapter 19 . 5/4/2023
I just want my man’s kirito to be able to use Excalibur cuz it’s cool as shit
kaiirine chapter 1 . 2/28/2023
This first chapter is familiar. I just read another SAO x DXD fic and the opening is almost the same. That was a one shot. Hopefully its not too similar.
Misabeth chapter 3 . 2/3/2023
Nice story so far.
I can't help but think that the D. in Argos name stands for devil and the mist businesses opportunity was for her to turn Kirito and Asuna into devils for her peerage herself...
Can't wait to read more
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