Reviews for Bloomington - A new beginning
Guest chapter 1 . 10/24/2015
Hi. This was great. Any plans to update? :)
Rain Addict CM chapter 1 . 1/7/2015
First off the idea for this story is awesome! Just made me smile real big, cause this is how the movie should of ended.
But I have to say that it was a bit smashed together, no real paragraphs, and no start of scenes, or scene endings.
I repeat though, the story idea was really a good idea.
Gleefreak15 chapter 1 . 12/12/2014
I don't know if you are still writing this story but I really like it.
JustKaty chapter 1 . 7/25/2014
Can you space this out? Very hard to read.
KM Rune chapter 1 . 4/21/2014
It looks to be good but with it all in block style...I can't read it.

It is a strain on the reader's eyes. Please consider spreading out the sentences and putting a space between them.

KM Rune