|Reviews for The Bet|
| RPGPersona chapter 1 . 10/21
Okay this was pretty funny. First we have Starfire playing strip sparring with Robin. Even when he has Starfire spar with someone else, she still finds a way. Beast Boy's fault. Sounds less like a prank and more like Beast Boy telling Starfire to be more aggressive in her advances. Trust Robin competitive spirit to keep him from giving up until he is in his boxers. I wonder if Starfire chased after her prize.
Hahaha, Raven peeking in at what her various emotions were going after training was hilarious. Thye all got inspired by Starfire and made up their own game to play with Beast Boy. I guess not even Raven can deny her feelings after seeing what all her emotions were doing. She ended up teleporting to Beast Boy's room and barging in on him taking a shower. That even more bold than what Starfire was doing and what her emotions were originally imagining.
Poor Beast Boy has no how to handle a Raven coming on to him while he is naked. It was an amusing way to end this story.
Thanks for writing, I enjoyed reading this.
| AngelSlayer135 chapter 1 . 5/18/2015
Pretty good story, I would have liked to have seen more difference between what the emoticlones were doing rather than them all "sparring" but still a good story overall. Not sure if it really needed to be rated M though, since the worst any of them was really doing was the stripping part and even that was written more like taking off shoes rather than a sensual experience.
| Because I Can and Will chapter 1 . 4/18/2015
I love Raven's emotions in this story, they are hilarious.
| Paradox.Peddler chapter 1 . 2/7/2015
Funny! I liked it!
| Dixxy chapter 1 . 1/4/2015
The best way to express my reaction would be a three-times repeated word : "ah".
"Ah ah ah !" indeed.
What a nicely amusing lil' one-shot here ! How could one not break into a smile
or even chuckle at this funny lil' piece ?
It's too diverting a story, really ! Some require a sequel, but to me, this unique-chaptered
story is all good as it is. It self-sufficient.
I especially loved the emoticlones part, coz it's so original, so guffaw-worth... and, damn, coz i just loooove the emoticlones ! They're one the elements i love the most abt Rae ! And even Timid and Knowledge going for it...! BB, you're such a seducer... even the emotions of the Dark Titan surrender to your charm ! ;)
Oh, and i agree wz reviewer Based Bobcat abt yr being "one of the best emoticlone writer out here on FF". That's so true !
And i also agree wz Lium D : this fiction here doesn't deserves a M-rating, but a T-rating. Okay, one's getting naked but that's not M-rated : not adult enough. A T-rated stuff it is to me.
And Raven licking her lips at the end...?! Waow, the once emotionless gets kinky here ? So much for surprises, really ! But since i'm absolutely not against OoC (unlike some... hum... "touchy" readers, ya know, purists...), i like it ! :)
And one more fav' from ya in my basket. Hey, haven't i been favoriting EACH of yr sTTories ? Yes, i did ! Well, hadn't i told ya ya had become my fav' wriTTer ?
Okay, one last sTTory to read from ya. And as usual wz yr stories, i'm pretty enthusiastic abt it ! :DDD
Thanxxxx 4 this very cool, very original, very amusing piece of entertainment ! Kudos to ya, once again !
Take care !
| XxsparrowkeyzxX chapter 1 . 12/10/2014
NOOOO!Ya can't just end it like that! *falls down crying*Why!?You have to make another chapter dude! Screw oneshots, I'm dying here!
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/23/2014
YES! YESS! OH YYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEESSSSSS! SOO RIGHTEOUS! WOOHAH!
| Dsman chapter 1 . 7/3/2014
wow she has gone crazy
| RedWyrmLord chapter 1 . 6/29/2014
| Concolor44 chapter 1 . 6/27/2014
Heh. When you're right, you're right, and the Emotions were all right.
BB's in for a hot time now, boy!
| SardonyxRosetta chapter 1 . 5/2/2014
Omg this is so wonderful.
| Aqua Rules chapter 1 . 4/26/2014
Hahahaha way to take the initiative Raven! Is this a one-shot or will there be more? If so, looking forward to the next update.
| LeprechaunGreen chapter 1 . 4/22/2014
| MushuFireLorde chapter 1 . 4/21/2014
wow lol haha take the initiative
| KillerWoW chapter 1 . 4/20/2014
Nick from L4D: NIICCE!'