Sad beginning but lovely ending. I hope you continue it

Hey you haven't updated in a while. This could be an interesting story. A Merman, huh? Hope you continue this.

I wanted to give you some kudos for your writing! It's very descriptive and emotive. I really liked this twist here, too. For some reason the fact that it took on a supernatural element just made it even better. Great job!

Continue continue! :)

OMG, this sounds so sad. Bella's father loved her, but Phil sounds just evil. Molesting her and then selling her. He sounds like a pimp. And her mother regretting having her and then not believing her about Phil. No wonder she wants to die. Is this the end?

Please don't let it be the end! I wanna read more and see if or who she might get entangled with, lol.