Reviews for Measurement Theory and Competitive Instinct
Seeker of the Skies chapter 1 . 9/22/2014
That was hilarious, utterly hilarious, I loved it. Serah and Vanille's reactions to everything made me laugh.
Major Mike Powell III chapter 1 . 9/6/2014
Well, well, soldier...

Ok...Ok, my face kinda hurts: I have the biggest, dumbest, most sh*t-eating grin on my face right now. 8D

This was just awesome. And pervy. And utterly ridiculous. And I think my IQ dropped a bit. And most importantly: BEWBZ! Big and beautiful. Especially Fang and Lightning's. *O*

And Vanille. Ohhh my, Vanille. a slut. Plain and simple: Vanille is a teenage slut. And I LOVE it! 8D

And Serah. Ohhh my. Poor, poor Serah. I think she was broken like, one quarter of the way in. XD

Wow. I'm kinda blown away by this. This was just awesome. :'D

Helluva job, Marine!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!
ShadowCub chapter 1 . 6/14/2014
Guest chapter 1 . 6/1/2014
Ah man. I need to see what's next. xD Serah is just so adorable! I really, REALLY wanna see what happens to their dinner. xD :3
kaito136 chapter 1 . 5/31/2014
LOOOOOLLL. Oh god SERAH! Why are you so adorable?! I totally love this fic though Fang and Light's IQ seem to drop by a great amount but Vanille and Serah's conversation is so damn cute. Awesome!

I see that there's no complete icon, so is there going to be another chapter? I'm gonna follow for now first then.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/25/2014
Xianit chapter 1 . 4/21/2014
O_O What the hell did I just read? I have no idea what this is, but it was absolutely hilarious. Put Fang's and Light's competitive instincts together and add Vanille. Poor Serah was probably traumatized for life. And they had to drag Hope into this as well. Wonder how he took this...
Tear of Light chapter 1 . 4/20/2014
This was just priceless! Wow, I couldn't stop laughing at this one. I'm not sure if I should feel happy or disturbed on Serah's behalf. Lol.
Mephi chapter 1 . 4/16/2014
Vanille is a dumb sluty teenager!
Arrietti chapter 1 . 4/15/2014
After reading this, my face ached so badly because I smiled one of the biggest smile ever. This was hilarious! I almost laughed out loud and made a fool of myself. Thank you for the fun story.
Gcohen chapter 1 . 4/15/2014
Serah almost having a heart attack is way too much fun! hahahah
BlueAbyssHax chapter 1 . 4/15/2014
In the end I was wondering/felt like this was jab at 's breast size increase for LR. those pairing of every kind between these four. and 3. well no three, but it was freakin hilarious,
DarkAngelDragnet chapter 1 . 4/15/2014
I think you broke Serah... Awesome! Do it some more!
Lady Filipino chapter 1 . 4/15/2014
Like double LOLZ! I luv it! This story is crazy with craziness! I enjoy this story, thanks for making my day! :-)
Toaneo07 Ver2.0 chapter 1 . 4/15/2014
hahahhahaha wow, cool
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