Reviews for Harbinger
dragonic raptor chapter 6 . 3/18
wow. i am really loving your stories that i have read so far. :D

i can also understand where you're coming from with the review thing since i am very similar. one's best bet is to keep an open mind about the stories. after all that is what they are...stories. they are fiction. but also a fantasy world that the writer is willing to share with others.

if one is to give any kind of criticism it should be constructive at least and not 'dogging it down' so to speak. to help make it better and not sneering at it. there will always be room for improvement.

i could continue but i don't want you to feel that i am rambling so on a good ending note; keep it up fore i am looking forward to more fantastic chapters from your imagination. ;p
Ranmaleopard chapter 6 . 1/23
Again this is just amazing I really can't wait for more!
thehaxthatisrico chapter 6 . 1/19
Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one
Saiga Uzumaki chapter 6 . 12/20/2014
First off, I love this story. Naruto's relationship with Hikari is great, and her admiration for him is adorable.

That being said, I noticed in the third chapter Menma is 2 years old & Mito is 4, however this chapter you said they're twins.

Sorta sloppy, dude. Just pointing that out.

Overall, outstanding story, thus far. Keep up the fantastic work.

-S. Uzumaki
Chrono chapter 5 . 12/4/2014
Very Nice
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 1 . 12/1/2014
and my interest dropped like a stone in water when i saw the harem part... you should just keep it Izumi and Himekara... 98% of harem stories (lets face it) suck and lose sight of everything, the girls get very little to no development, they all just fall for him at first sight and wanna fuck his brains out

so please, just keep it as 2 - 3 girls and actually give them proper development and build up the relationships instead of the usual crap

well, im going to sleep now... i shall read the remainder when i awake... good night
hitman007 chapter 5 . 11/28/2014
Nice selection of harem , bro keep it up.
Zorobak chapter 6 . 11/8/2014
I think that the story would be more interesting if Naruto learned about Kaguya being Kagura before she wants him to know.
DraxAQN chapter 6 . 11/2/2014
Can't wait for the next chapter.
TheInnerBeast chapter 6 . 10/23/2014
I love everything about this. I also want to see this 'dark' Naruto in action maybe even a flashback of that night Kagura/Kaguya was 'killed'.
Armyj88 chapter 6 . 10/21/2014
Aye need more chapters
Dragoon698 chapter 5 . 10/14/2014
Could you add mei T just an idea
Guest chapter 6 . 10/12/2014
I have to say this story is one of a kind. More Please!
Guest chapter 6 . 10/8/2014
I like how well thought out your 'Naruto drink' was. It also nice to see him open up a little more than what he was. It would be nice to see him kick some ass sometime soon, and you haven't really talked much about the shinju or Indra and Asura. That's not to say you should stop with all the relationship stuff though as it's rather entertaining. Sorry for your lack of motivation, hopefully you'll keep finding it, but I suppose you shouldn't keep working on something your not enjoying. Good luck on whatever you decide to do.
animenaruto46 chapter 6 . 10/7/2014
Thank you ncpfan
Minato mentioned that he will not allow any man to raise his "kids" I can see a big scenero here, minato finding out naruto is engaged-thanks to taunades big mouth-will cause minato to be curious of his "son's" life, then him finding out naruto and kushina having a family dinner-without him-when he finds narutos apartment which will lead to him ruining dinner and also figuring out naruto getting closer to the family and also try to get closer with him to which he will believe that kushina will come back to him, but will be surprised that its the exact opposite and to add salt to the wounds his "kids" think naruto as there father instead of minato, this fact will infuriate minato and the rest is in the imagination
I like how menma and mito think of naruto as there tou-San it was really heart warming
But what of the clans-uzumaki and namikaze clan-thoughts on the divorce?
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